Clouds

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Pleiades Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May
09/09/2023

Cottony, Cumulus 
Clouds dappled on blue can
coalesce into banks;
creating a dull, drab,
cheerless, depressing day,
consistent with rain and
children's disappointment.

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Sam Scott

Date: 9/14/2023 5:06:00 AM

Emile - you did great with this, I love the "consistent with rain and children's disappointment." phrase - been there, seen that! Congratulations :-))

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/14/2023 8:09:00 AM

Thanks, Sam; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Emilia James

Date: 9/12/2023 9:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Emile. Emilia : )

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/12/2023 10:27:00 AM

Thanks, Emilia; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/12/2023 7:43:00 AM

A great pleiades, Emile! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/12/2023 10:27:00 AM

Thanks, Kim; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Terry Miller

Date: 9/12/2023 1:01:00 AM

Excellent Pleiades, great flow between lines, congratulations.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/12/2023 7:24:00 AM

Thanks, Terry; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/11/2023 11:43:00 AM

Hello Emile, I hope all is well with you. Oh! Congrats on your win. I have POTW. the poem is The Cat. Yes dark clouds can ruin a day planned outside. Also rain makes it sad for children wanting to play outside. My friend enjoy your day. /Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/12/2023 10:37:00 AM

Hello Emile, Thank you Emile. I like to hear from you as well. Thank you I am honored to receive this POTW.I had two more comments today. thank you for reading. My friend enjoy your day. /Darlene\

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/11/2023 1:07:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene, I always like to hear from you, Congratulations on POTW... I will go read your poem "The Cat", now, my friend, Emile.