Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Haiku

Clouds

autumn's champagne light
                              dizzily dreamy mauve clouds 
                                     geese heading warm south


                                      

                                       August 12, 2022
                            Syllables checked by HMS.com
                     "Nature-themed Haiku" Poetry Contest
                                  Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2022 at 1:37 PM Beautiful scene you painted. Congrats.

Jennifer Proxenos August 23, 2022 at 7:50 AM Congratulations Mala my friend for your win in the contest, really a feather in your cap, your Haiku was brilliant. Blessings, Hugs, JENNIFER

Len Gasun August 23, 2022 at 6:56 AM Splendid! I love the imagery of nature in your poem. Congratulations my dear friend! Thanks for sharing. God bless. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith August 22, 2022 at 1:35 PM Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write/story you gave told in a few words. Have a great/blessed day........... Malabika Ray Choudhury August 23, 2022 at 6:40 AM Thanks, Paula. Your comments inspire me.

Tania Kitchin August 22, 2022 at 5:30 AM Mala, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku! Malabika Ray Choudhury August 23, 2022 at 6:39 AM Thanks, Tania. Your contests are awesome! Feel honoured!

Jennifer Proxenos August 13, 2022 at 11:03 AM Clever Geese heading South - how many of us would like to sprout wings and do the same as Autumn and Winter approach. Great write my friend, Hugs and kisses Jennifer. Malabika Ray Choudhury August 23, 2022 at 6:39 AM Thank you, Jennifer. Living in Canada, I envy the geese when I see them heading south every year. Love ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu August 12, 2022 at 4:20 PM Hello Mala, I love the image of this poem. Love & Friendship Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu August 13, 2022 at 11:17 AM Hello Mala, I would stand looking out the window for what seems like hours, watching the geese fly south . In my thoughts I would say to them "Come and get me." Love & Friendship Darlene Malabika Ray Choudhury August 12, 2022 at 5:51 PM Thank you, Dear Darlene. So glad you liked the image. Love and friendship ~ Mala

Bill Baker August 12, 2022 at 1:30 PM Nice imagery in your Haiku, Mala. A colorful scene. I love it when I see the geese as they migrate south. Thanks for sharing, Bill Malabika Ray Choudhury August 12, 2022 at 5:50 PM Thank you, Bill. I love them flying in the V-shape too.