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Clouds

autumn's champagne light dizzily dreamy mauve clouds geese heading warm south August 12, 2022 Syllables checked by HMS.com "Nature-themed Haiku" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2022 1:37:00 PM

Beautiful scene you painted. Congrats.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/23/2022 7:50:00 AM

Congratulations Mala my friend for your win in the contest, really a feather in your cap, your Haiku was brilliant. Blessings, Hugs, JENNIFER

Len Gasun

Date: 8/23/2022 6:56:00 AM

Splendid! I love the imagery of nature in your poem. Congratulations my dear friend! Thanks for sharing. God bless. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/22/2022 1:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write/story you gave told in a few words. Have a great/blessed day...........

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2022 6:40:00 AM

Thanks, Paula. Your comments inspire me.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/22/2022 5:30:00 AM

Mala, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2022 6:39:00 AM

Thanks, Tania. Your contests are awesome! Feel honoured!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/13/2022 11:03:00 AM

Clever Geese heading South - how many of us would like to sprout wings and do the same as Autumn and Winter approach. Great write my friend, Hugs and kisses Jennifer.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2022 6:39:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer. Living in Canada, I envy the geese when I see them heading south every year. Love ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/12/2022 4:20:00 PM

Hello Mala, I love the image of this poem. Love & Friendship Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/13/2022 11:17:00 AM

Hello Mala, I would stand looking out the window for what seems like hours, watching the geese fly south . In my thoughts I would say to them "Come and get me." Love & Friendship Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/12/2022 5:51:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Darlene. So glad you liked the image. Love and friendship ~ Mala

Bill Baker

Date: 8/12/2022 1:30:00 PM

Nice imagery in your Haiku, Mala. A colorful scene. I love it when I see the geese as they migrate south. Thanks for sharing, Bill

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/12/2022 5:50:00 PM

Thank you, Bill. I love them flying in the V-shape too.