Clouds

The peaceful clouds float leisuerly by Above Natrona County, Wyoming The pictures you can see are beyond belief There's a pig and a bear side by side And over there a volcano's smoke I am not to scientific So I don't know the terms They use to explain their exhistance But in the heat here below I have my my own interpertation As cool as it seems up there from here They must be caused by the Angels breaths

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 7/24/2008 10:09:00 AM

This was truly lovely. You have such a wonderful way of expressing yourself in the way you view things. Nice to meet you, and thanks for your comment on one of my first poetic pieces. Peace, Ivy

Brian Strand

Date: 7/13/2008 12:39:00 AM

Nice work Marycile & thanks for your recnt comments on my postings Rgds Brian

James Foulk

Date: 7/11/2008 1:33:00 PM

very beautiful poem. love poems about clouds, i have wrote a few my self. clouds are a wonderful thing to watch.

Mary Duhart

Date: 7/10/2008 6:24:00 PM

I love watching the clouds to. It reminds me of Eric Carle's "Look Like Spilt Milk". Great write.

Date: 7/8/2008 4:03:00 PM

I like the last line in this one. Interesting imagery. I just found out The Soup was back up today. I look foward to catching up with everyone. Keep on writing! Karen

Charles Fuller

Date: 7/8/2008 6:51:00 AM

Angels breath indeed!! I love watching the clouds rolling with the surf of the Atlantic as they roll off the AppalachianMountains. Beautiful words. Hope your doing great Cile. In my thoughts. My best, Charlie

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/7/2008 5:22:00 AM

That's an interpretation that I can sure appreciate and relate to. Whenever there are lights in the sky, I tell my kids that they're angels in the clouds, so I can really understand this and the magnificence of them. Very well written and expressed. Michael

P Sheart

Date: 7/6/2008 11:14:00 AM

Hi Sweet! I just loved reading this. My heart and imagination are running wild and free. Thanks for sharing this beautiful angelic write with us! Oh and thanks hun for your comments on my writing I so enjoy you! Take care hun! You truly are a blessing!Love Light Truth Patricia

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/6/2008 9:57:00 AM

Hi Cile - how is my special mom doing today? Loved the way you speak of the clouds - they are a special gift - I would love to come see Wyoming sometime - I have to get going to church Cile - Love you

Ronald Bingham

Date: 7/4/2008 7:26:00 PM

Heidie said what I was thinking when I first read it. Reminded me of my childhood, kicked back watching life just float on by, good seeing you back, Ron

Heidie Buys

Date: 7/4/2008 9:54:00 AM

Lovely as always Cile. Brought back memories of childhood, lying on the grass and looking for things in the clouds. I always saw witches with long noses, lol. Awesome ending. Love Heidie

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/4/2008 9:46:00 AM

Sounds breathtakingly beautiful. And such a beautiful concept of 'Angels breaths'. Lovely write dear Cile. Happy 4th to you. Love, Shar