Marycile Beer Poet Free verse

Clouds

The peaceful clouds float leisuerly by
Above Natrona County, Wyoming
The pictures you can see are beyond belief
There's a pig and a bear side by side
And over there a volcano's smoke
I am not to scientific 
So I don't know the terms 
They use to explain their exhistance
But in the heat here below
I have my my own interpertation
As cool as it seems up there from here
They must be caused by the Angels breaths

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Angela Crabtree July 24, 2008 at 10:09 AM This was truly lovely. You have such a wonderful way of expressing yourself in the way you view things. Nice to meet you, and thanks for your comment on one of my first poetic pieces. Peace, Ivy

Brian Strand July 13, 2008 at 12:39 AM Nice work Marycile & thanks for your recnt comments on my postings Rgds Brian

James Foulk July 11, 2008 at 1:33 PM very beautiful poem. love poems about clouds, i have wrote a few my self. clouds are a wonderful thing to watch.

Mary Duhart July 10, 2008 at 6:24 PM I love watching the clouds to. It reminds me of Eric Carle's "Look Like Spilt Milk". Great write.

July 8, 2008 at 4:03 PM I like the last line in this one. Interesting imagery. I just found out The Soup was back up today. I look foward to catching up with everyone. Keep on writing! Karen

Charles Fuller July 8, 2008 at 6:51 AM Angels breath indeed!! I love watching the clouds rolling with the surf of the Atlantic as they roll off the AppalachianMountains. Beautiful words. Hope your doing great Cile. In my thoughts. My best, Charlie

Michael Degenhardt July 7, 2008 at 5:22 AM That's an interpretation that I can sure appreciate and relate to. Whenever there are lights in the sky, I tell my kids that they're angels in the clouds, so I can really understand this and the magnificence of them. Very well written and expressed. Michael

P Sheart July 6, 2008 at 11:14 AM Hi Sweet! I just loved reading this. My heart and imagination are running wild and free. Thanks for sharing this beautiful angelic write with us! Oh and thanks hun for your comments on my writing I so enjoy you! Take care hun! You truly are a blessing!Love Light Truth Patricia

Michael Jordan July 6, 2008 at 9:57 AM Hi Cile - how is my special mom doing today? Loved the way you speak of the clouds - they are a special gift - I would love to come see Wyoming sometime - I have to get going to church Cile - Love you

Ronald Bingham July 4, 2008 at 7:26 PM Heidie said what I was thinking when I first read it. Reminded me of my childhood, kicked back watching life just float on by, good seeing you back, Ron

Heidie Buys July 4, 2008 at 9:54 AM Lovely as always Cile. Brought back memories of childhood, lying on the grass and looking for things in the clouds. I always saw witches with long noses, lol. Awesome ending. Love Heidie

Sharon Winter July 4, 2008 at 9:46 AM Sounds breathtakingly beautiful. And such a beautiful concept of 'Angels breaths'. Lovely write dear Cile. Happy 4th to you. Love, Shar