Clouds

Charcoal grey, silver grey, shading to white,
Changing and shifting,
Pewter grey, ashy grey, darkness then light,
Trailing and lifting.

A quiet avalanche of melting clouds
In horizontal fall,
Covering distant hill tops like a shroud
Or funeral pall.

Shapes form, reform, then float away
In careful counterpoise,
Then balance, hover, shift and sway,
There is no noise.

A sudden change, the wind picks up,
Disorder in the sky,
Which way to go at first unclear,
Then the clouds begin to fly.

Across the vast and open prairie skies
The clouds stampede,
Driven by wayward winds they fall and rise
At breakneck speed.

Such confidence we can never realise.
Here on the ground we hesitate and stumble.

They are in their element.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/9/2019 1:52:00 PM
I just had to "fav" this one; I can see those clouds from your description.unc
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Alison Douglas
Date: 2/12/2019 6:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging comment. I really appreciate the feedback. Thank you again.
Date: 1/29/2019 9:41:00 PM
G'day Alison … A nice style of rhyming poetry. Tells a neat story and asks questions - well done Alison - Lindsay
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Date: 2/12/2019 6:09:00 AM
Hi Lindsay, thank you so much for your comment. I really appreciate the encouragement. Thank you once again.
Date: 1/29/2019 3:06:00 PM
I have a feeling you were seeing this yesterday somewhere in the northern midwest of the U.S. Am I correct? You described it perfectly!
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