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Written: September 13, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ Through cloudless weeps, my pen glides. Trace severe, dense whispers of afire minds. Under the brisk beams of the Autumn sun. Anguish is my tapestry, where sobs flow a ton. Upon a cheek where tears have already stained, I paint a portrait of sorrow, in shades of disdain. The sallow skin, marked by the weight of despair, Reflects the anguish of a soul left threadbare. Through cloudless tears, my pen bear flight. To bewilder the core of souls, ailed and contrite. I investigate experiencing anguish and strife. Bestow light to the stories of a broken life. Weeping clouds amass, ready to wash away The burning tears, the wounds that never sway. Their sacred endeavor, to cleanse and heal, To suggest solace and an opportunity to feel. Through cloudless tears, my pen flies around. The intention of referring to the night wound. So that the oppressed and laconic can speak, That society's covert truths be made public.

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Date: 9/15/2023 12:56:00 AM
Your poems like swabs absorb and wipe away melancholy and tears and refract rainbow hues of cheer. Poignant emotions are powerfully expressed in this heart touching poem. The broken shards of the heart should be glued together to start anew. Great work as ever, dear friend.
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Date: 9/14/2023 6:02:00 PM
I enjoyed this melancholy piece Sotto.
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Date: 9/14/2023 12:24:00 PM
I really loved this poem! There's a lot of light in it....
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Date: 9/14/2023 10:44:00 AM
Nice poem. Love the line, "Weeping clouds amass, ready to wash away The burning tears, the wounds that never sway.".
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Date: 9/14/2023 12:14:00 AM
“Through cloudless tears my pen flies around” that is a line I have never seen, so unique and imaginative you are with expressing such profound emotions in such a poignant manner in artistic manner. As always the cadence and rhythm of sorrow and angst and all those emotions that oppressed feel etc youve penned them for them, in sheer eloquence. I also love weeping clouds and portrait of sorrow! Brilliant . Every poem of yours is just beyond impeccable! Loving the imagery and depth
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Date: 9/13/2023 10:53:00 PM
Another heartfelt poem Las, its not how you handle a broken life, Its how you handle life after the pieces have been picked up. A wonderful write. Cheers SV
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Date: 9/13/2023 7:01:00 PM
Weeping clouds amass, ready to wash away The burning tears, the wounds that never sway.
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