Cloud Nine

When you touched me, sparks ignited love 
holding hands, everything shone perfect 
through your hair, golden shining halo 
Appearing most beautiful angel 
that ever held this vision, in front 
of these eyes, melting snowflakes 
Through windows, one gem whom shines 
with a shimmering sweet hum 
lighting the golden pathway 
on shores together we babe 
walked hand in hand as one 
United our spirits sang 
floated with the souls, danced a couple 
Watching you care free so beautiful 
waving your arms, sweet through these eyes crowned
Rising the soul in gentle heartbeats  
Loving you in blue clouds, white fluffy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 11/16/2014 12:16:00 PM
On cloud nine...so love is in the air! Your united spirits float where passion dwells...romantic and touching! Well done, Liam! // paul
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/16/2014 12:19:00 PM
paul love always flows in the air of thoughts of someone beautiful wonderful comment heartfelt thank you dear friend deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 11/15/2014 6:34:00 PM
How romantic is this Liam, your imagination runs away with you, loved it, take care my friend......Vera............
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/16/2014 3:58:00 AM
its nice when you feel in your heart a heavenly feelings towards someone its something that lives inside full of light i believe forever because its pure wonderful comment vera nearly got me spilling the beans smiling dear friend thank you kindly bless you
Date: 11/15/2014 4:20:00 PM
filled with affection and sweet passion,liam... well composed and so dreamy!... huggs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/15/2014 5:41:00 PM
thank you nette dear friend smiling very beautiful comment bless you pal
Date: 11/15/2014 12:03:00 PM
Liam, my dear friend, this is a very beautiful and most romantic love poem that you've penned here. Glowing golden pen! Just perfect as it is! A 7 for me! I really enjoyed reading it today. :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/15/2014 12:13:00 PM
you are so sweet dorian heartfelt beautiful thank you deeply bless you a wonderful comment bless you dear friend
Date: 11/14/2014 9:11:00 PM
A love song that ends to soon . . . all the best my friend.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/15/2014 7:30:00 AM
smiling david tell the truth you just want hear the whole story the play wonderful comment lol got me thinking again need to stop this old brain of mine ha ha before it fries
Date: 11/14/2014 7:14:00 PM
Okay babe, your thoughts are beautiful, I had to reread it a couple times, because the puncuation is not present, It would be so intense and drive home your thoughts if you added coma's and .... you are so great with the visual. I am always on a cloud when I read your words.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/15/2014 7:26:00 AM
smiling dear friend thank you deeply for helping me see something wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 11/14/2014 6:50:00 PM
Incredible imagery Liam this is absolutely delightful! Hugs Jan xx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/14/2014 7:25:00 PM
thank you kindly jan truly amazing beautiful comment bless you pal
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