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Fluffy white thing that just hangs there - a cotton ball of droplets hovering below the blue plaster that restrains the stars from falling down... A world beyond my reach - fairy castles in magical lands where my every wish comes true, and all that I love perseveres... I long to travel there - amongst those dream worlds to experience the liberation so I look to you and say, take me there... Copyright Deon J.H. Burger 2014

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Date: 2/4/2016 6:28:00 AM
Deon, your piece has inspired me to pick you up on my zephyr! "I long to travel there-", as well :), jill
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Deon Burger
Date: 2/12/2016 1:03:00 AM
Thank you so much... glad it inspired someone :)

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry