Cloud

Fluffy white thing that just hangs there - 
a cotton ball of droplets
hovering below the blue plaster
that restrains the stars
from falling down...
 
A world beyond my reach -
fairy castles
in magical lands
where my every wish comes true,
and all that I love perseveres...
 
I long to travel there - 
amongst those dream worlds
to experience the liberation
so I look to you
and say,
take me there...
 
Copyright Deon J.H. Burger 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Spagnola Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 6:28 AM
Deon, your piece has inspired me to pick you up on my zephyr! "I long to travel there-", as well :), jill
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February 12, 2016 at 1:03 AM
Thank you so much... glad it inspired someone :)
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