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Moon was alike a diamond ring, All thru the previous night. She now unveils her flawless rear cling, When uttering the world in sight. Pale moon emerged from dark cloud, Like a deep ethereal sight. It soars at dawn and dark sky, proud, It yields a harsh glare and faint light. Moon on my bed jolts me awake, Deemed the earth ready-shake. Lush lovers are set by full moon, It will be visible, soon.
Written: July 16, 2022 3rd Place Contest Win. Subject: 4. The pale moon emerged from dark clouds One In Five 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 8/1/2022 8:29:00 AM
Hi Lasaad what a beautiful write my friend congratulations on your win, and hope you have an awesome week ahead of you. Hugs and blessings, JENNIFER.
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Date: 7/30/2022 3:12:00 AM
Romance shines in the moonlight, Congrats on your win Sotto
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Date: 7/30/2022 6:28:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading placing and commenting on my poem. It means a lot to me, Joseph. Best regards
Date: 7/18/2022 6:09:00 PM
The moon shining on the ocean is beautiful to see. Wonderful poetry Sotto … Belle
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Date: 7/17/2022 4:04:00 PM
Hello Lassad, when the moon shines on the body of water is shows its true beauty. It sparkles brightly. Enjoy your evening my friend
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Date: 7/17/2022 10:31:00 AM
I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this contest entry. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visits inspire me to do better. Sara
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Date: 7/17/2022 5:51:00 AM
Always a wonderful sight when moon emerges--a sight to adore!
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Date: 7/16/2022 8:46:00 PM
Enjoyed the pale moon's emergence from the clouds ! A lovely poem and a competent entry for the contest ! All the Best, dear friend Lasaad !
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