Closing the Shop At the End of the Day

Dusk
Lights out
Lock the door
I turn towards home
This was another good day at the store
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 9:46 AM
yes you meet customers ,you sell,you chat too,some come to buy,some come just to say a word or two-beautiful coloured day,a day with different people--great write Jim
Guzzi Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 9:37 AM
This verse seems to fill the pre-req's of the form perfectly and has a lovely, sound, whole, completness. Light & Love
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