Closing In

dusk
is pressing
as the mist
rolls in
with the growl
of thunder
and the eyes
of Jupiter



AP: 2nd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 1:39 PM
This is so sensory laden, especially 'dusk is pressing' and 'eyes of Jupiter'-
Gauthier Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Thank you so much, Michelle. Most appreciated.
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