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Closing In

dusk is pressing as the mist rolls in with the growl of thunder and the eyes of Jupiter AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on April 28, 2019 for contest APRIL 20129 PREMIER 11 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on November 3, 2018

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Date: 11/5/2018 1:39:00 PM
This is so sensory laden, especially 'dusk is pressing' and 'eyes of Jupiter'-
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Date: 11/5/2018 4:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Michelle. Most appreciated.

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