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Closet Song

It calls to me, From the darkness, It sings, Ever so sweetly, A finger beckons, Bloody and scarred, I can feel the terror, Clutching at my heart, The whispers, The hinge squeaking, The door softly creaking, The covers are over my head, My throat locked in dread, The closet inhabited by the dead, Calling, singing, The crack widening, As I begin screaming.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/30/2015 12:59:00 PM
Interesting closet
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Date: 10/18/2015 10:50:00 AM
Really enjoyed this!
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Date: 10/13/2015 2:49:00 PM
Hi Charli, Congratulations on your own favorite Halloween Poem. Take Care **SKAT**
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Date: 10/13/2015 12:28:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Charli!
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Charli Pitts
Date: 10/13/2015 1:24:00 AM
Thank you so very much !
Date: 10/9/2015 4:41:00 PM
AThank You for entering my contest with your Halloween poem. A perfect poem for the holliday.
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Charli Pitts
Date: 10/13/2015 1:23:00 AM
Thank you kindly. I appreciate it very much so.
Date: 10/2/2015 10:16:00 AM
Charli, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Charli Pitts
Date: 10/13/2015 1:24:00 AM
Thank you Linda, I am very glad to be here!
Date: 10/2/2015 12:36:00 AM
Charli, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2015 1:41:00 AM
Bev, I actually wrote this poem for your contest!! I appreciate your input. Thank you very much. I'm sure I will have more horror themed postings soon.
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