Closer Than a Kiss

Once upon a time
a handsome prince fell in love
the lady, common
deemed not worthy of his class...
yet he’s closer than a kiss.

© Harry J Horsman  2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 2:11 AM
Belated congratulations on your winning spot harry,love the commoner and prince angle xx
May Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 7:42 PM
congrats on your win Harry
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 7:15 PM
Hi, Harry, Glad to see you on my winners' list. I really enjoyed the idea of this lady who must be having a clandestine affair with him?
Guzzi Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 6:37 PM
Congrad's Harry keep that kisser working! Light & Love
Devnath  Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 9:13 AM
Deep sensational poem. Really wonderful piece. Thanks for your sweet comment. Loved always, bl
K. Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 10:17 AM
Very sweet, that definitely elicits a smile from the reader. Wonderful, Harry! Sending you soupmail in a bit.
Singleton Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 5:33 PM
Like this one Harry :)
Duncan Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 4:22 PM
I like this,,,,, nicely done. Happy New Year Harry ;}
Sanderson Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 3:49 PM
I am tranquilized by this, kiss, inspired by your pen, very well done Harry, may your new year be blessed...
Breidenthal Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 2:48 AM
Awesome verse! Very nicely penned indeed.thanks for the kind feedback on my stuff! Always, Laura
Griffin Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 2:42 AM
very inspiring!
Moore Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 8:48 PM
You write some of the most romantic pieces...I love this..Thanks for your comments..Hugs, Holly Moore
O'Leary Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 5:03 PM
'Closer than a kiss'... can't beat that, Harry... very nice... Terry
A  Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 3:23 PM
close is better than far. why must one stick to their class. I think you have jingled a good tanka here. I will express my thoughts with myself now. sweeter than sweet. *LUV~SKAT
Goodwin Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 11:59 AM
Very nicely done. Best of luck and happy new year. -- Sean
Harrell Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 6:50 AM
I like it, Harry. It's cute :)
Ellison Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 6:33 AM
You romantic old dog, you! LOL A real charmer... cheers, Jack
Manassian Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 6:27 AM
How absolutely romantic! Nothing should stand in the way of true love! Good write, Harry! :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 6:13 AM
Wow love it xx
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