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"Closer" There is a light hidden in the heart of man deeply embedded it summons ignition each day the portal opens further something beckons come closer come closer the door widens like the mouth of the whale in your dreams you are Jonah inside your vessel waits the one who walks on water the heart is a burning flame lighting minds like wicks rapturous disbelief 3 days, 3 nights before closure there seated steadfast marking your time all commanding beckons the closer believing your disbelief the Sun reflects in your eyes come closer come closer (LadyLabyrinth / 2021) LUX VITAE "The Son, The Sun" / Low https://youtu.be/fPS8ZvWVv0M "the fish's eyes were like windows and a pearl inside its mouth provided further illumination." https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jonah https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/communion_1007994

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Date: 7/6/2021 1:52:00 AM
ref Dimino/Seed
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/6/2021 1:52:00 AM
Lux Vitae Lux
Date: 6/25/2021 8:39:00 AM
Walk into the light and I'll be awaiting with the key to unlock all that is hidden in the dark
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/25/2021 3:26:00 PM
keep dreamin'
Date: 6/21/2021 2:09:00 PM
If one truly seeks illumination, light finds its way to shine upon that soul. For darkness can not stop the light but light so easily vanquishes the invading darkness. Another fine fav- another fine gem read.. God bless....
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/21/2021 2:33:00 PM
The light people are looking for, resides deep within. Believe.
Date: 6/19/2021 7:21:00 AM
Too much to ponder on this one, but three days aren't enough to give a serious advice or a prophecy..may be one should introspect himself and have a singularity of feelings and destiny..trust your heart. stay safe lady, God bless.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/20/2021 5:39:00 AM
Indeed.