Closely Watched

soft, warm, summer breeze
tender kiss, sweet surrender
hawks slowly circle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 10:31 PM
Awesome senryu, Peter! I enjoyed the superb imagery.
Iversen  Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 8:31 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Evelyn & thanks for the comments-Peter
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 5:46 PM
Hello Peter Iversen, yes the Hawks closely watch. have a nice evening my friend.
Iversen  Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Thanks for the read Darlene-Peter
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