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Closed Room

Been feeling a little down lately Cant control what resides in me Ah got feelings am tryna hide Got answers am tryna find Got thoughts crowed in my mind Looking at my life as it goes by Got tears build up in my eyes Oh how i wanna cry But i tell myself its alright Its gonna be fine Take it one day at a time But god dam this feeling is real This pain that i feel It got me in my knees God help me please Yh they see me smile But little do they realize That its just another disguise To hide the pain inside Seems like ive locked myself away Behind a closed door everyday And i dont seem to see Any light shining upon me How could it be Darkness is over taking me

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/16/2025 11:23:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Jan Terry

Date: 2/26/2018 3:51:00 PM

Hello again, Cynthia. I am still here. Hope you are working through your depression and seeing those who care circling around you. Sending love and positive thoughts your way. Hugs from your friend Jan.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/22/2018 8:46:00 AM

Cynthia, I hope you keep finding ways to look up! I am sure the deeper the pit the harder. When I find myself in that place I keep praying even amidst the darkness. God didn’t magically take me out of it but held my hand through it. Things happened in succession that were absolutely from God. Hang onto the good things even through the hard. Hugs to you dear Cynthia!

Silent One

Date: 1/21/2018 9:12:00 AM

I think it is important to talk to someone Cynthia, there are some places where you live who can offer you support and help you to deal with your thoughts...

Jan Terry

Date: 1/20/2018 9:16:00 PM

Cynthia, I'm still here reading your thoughts and feeling your pain through your poems. I hope, at some point, you will find your way out of the darkness. Please know that you have a friend in poetry rooting for you. Hugs. Jan

Cynthia Valentine
Date: 1/21/2018 5:34:00 AM

Good morning thank u so much for your support it really means alot to me by the help of god things will get better