Close-Call

I'm running, panting. I feel hot breath on my neck. I turn, nothing there!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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George   Avatar
December 31, 2009 at 6:15 PM
SENSATIONAL! Lainie
Haick Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 5:19 PM
This is a good scary Senryu! But I like it! Peace and love, Audrey
Fraser Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 12:45 PM
Nice Senyru Jimmy, it's like a shortie nightmare >> James
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 5:22 PM
Fear will pray on one's sense of reason. Keep writing. Sara
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