Close To Perfection

When I am around you I can feel the truth
You begin to speak and I can only focus on you
No pain no sorrow and no regrets, Just you
Your eyes are like the peaceful forest of nature
Your smile is the smile of an angel sent down to earth
Your voice is like the wind in a dream, so peaceful
And your kiss is the most beautiful thing that I have found
I cannot reach out to you anymore
You will never again let me see you in peace
It hurts to walk a step closer, as I see myself farther away
Do you ever notice me looking your way
You are the only one that I see...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 18, 2009 at 10:19 AM
Congratulations on having your wonderful poem featured!! ~Trudy~
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October 12, 2009 at 2:01 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Robert >> James
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October 12, 2009 at 3:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Robert. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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October 11, 2009 at 4:56 PM
What an uplifting view. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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September 27, 2009 at 3:03 PM
love is a very difficult thing sometimes, they don't always see you or you just love simply lose the one who matters most. I'm glad you liked my earlier poem
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September 27, 2009 at 12:27 PM
Very passionate and romantic write. Keep writing. Sara
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