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Close To Perfection

When I am around you I can feel the truth You begin to speak and I can only focus on you No pain no sorrow and no regrets, Just you Your eyes are like the peaceful forest of nature Your smile is the smile of an angel sent down to earth Your voice is like the wind in a dream, so peaceful And your kiss is the most beautiful thing that I have found I cannot reach out to you anymore You will never again let me see you in peace It hurts to walk a step closer, as I see myself farther away Do you ever notice me looking your way You are the only one that I see...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 10/18/2009 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on having your wonderful poem featured!! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/12/2009 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Robert >> James
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Robert. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2009 4:56:00 PM
What an uplifting view. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/27/2009 3:03:00 PM
love is a very difficult thing sometimes, they don't always see you or you just love simply lose the one who matters most. I'm glad you liked my earlier poem
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Date: 9/27/2009 12:27:00 PM
Very passionate and romantic write. Keep writing. Sara
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