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Quiet places
seem to offer a way out - 
early mornings thick with mist
and the sheeted calm
of water mirroring first light
filtering through the willow trees 
on the far bank. 
And yet a strange tension 
surrounds the still.

Sometimes,
I am sure if I reach out,
my hand will pass right through
a membrane that holds
this world within a bubble - 
I will break out into what
is truly real and shines
through the stained glass
windows of all great art
and sings to the soul.

In heightened moments
we all seem a mere millimetre 
away from rupturing this thin,
suffocating self prison,
to be close to taking
a breath of pure air 
from a place we have known
and yet been away from
for so long - our home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 5:21 PM
your words resonated with me. I especially liked these lines: I will break out into what is truly real and shines through the stained glass windows of all great art and sings to the soul.
Willason Avatar
May 27, 2026 at 1:49 PM
Hi Sara, Many thanks for thoughtful comments. Appreciated. Paul
Maul Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 11:50 PM
I wanted to write a long compliment, but I will end up overthinking this piece and make no sense whatsoever. Good job with this poem.
Willason Avatar
May 27, 2026 at 1:51 PM
Thanks Michael for reading the poem and providing feedback. Appreciated. Paul
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