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Close To Her Heart

CLOSE TO HER HEART when father passed on one lady was all broken up in his pocket a necklace at the home mother wears the missile close to her heart Dave Austin

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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 1/10/2015 8:08:00 AM
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One last thing the title is spectacular!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 1/10/2015 8:06:00 AM
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Wow, very imaginative this could be interpreted so many ways. I like to think he kept his wife's necklace in his pocket out of love. Though touching for the love of his life and how much she was loved at the same time a constant reminder the love of her life is gone. I could interpret at least two more stories and many variances of each. I hope you don't mind my imagination going wild with what is after all your write. I am a theatrical director and I can't help myself. Lots Of Love Armand!
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Daver Austin
Date: 1/10/2015 10:05:00 AM
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All your speculation was going on in this woman's head at the funeral home. Love, daver
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/30/2014 12:19:00 AM
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great write :) Happy New Year !
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 12/29/2014 3:59:00 AM
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Sad, nostalgic and absolutely beautiful...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/29/2014 12:36:00 AM
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Bittersweet one! you are really cranking out the tanka lately, Daver!! but it's great because they suit you.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 12/28/2014 5:52:00 PM
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Oh, how lovely..Your Dad and Mom I assume..Nice work Dave-r. BG
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Daver Austin
Date: 12/30/2014 10:15:00 AM
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Just a bit of imagination. Love, daver
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/28/2014 1:39:00 PM
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such a touching write Daver I can imagine this happening:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/28/2014 1:39:00 PM
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Interesting work..Was the one lady that was broken up mom?..Was the necklace her necklace?..Sara
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Daver Austin
Date: 12/30/2014 9:59:00 AM
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Just a bit of imagination, Sara. Thanks for dropping by. LOve, daver

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