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"clockwork Man"

Lost my key
no energy

no plans to execute
mind shut on mute

need a way to wind up
cease being a lump

don't do dope
lose all hope

not really depressed
just tired I guess

tired of a clock
time doled in a block

of work and meals
it all just feels

slowly robotic
a life so unchaotic

boring in its routine
stifling inbetween

those quiet moments of tick tock
that lock

my mind in peace
with no need to reach

beyond NOW.



~~~~~~~~~~~~ words taken from a Henning Mankell mystery prompting
                                 this write.  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/17/2009 10:05:00 PM
a beautifully flowing piece with wonderful repitition of rhythm within which took the reader into the feelings that you have displayed in these well versed lines,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 6/12/2009 9:58:00 AM
so true so often your verse..It's a lifes work to keep away from these feelings. Thank you for the congradulations on Hunger knows Caution. Light & Love
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Date: 6/6/2009 8:00:00 AM
The short lines work well for a creative perspective--one that most will relate to. It has a lighthearted feel that works well. Nice use of rhyme. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 6/5/2009 9:41:00 AM
Sue I feel this way many days - great job with this - God Bless, mj
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Date: 6/4/2009 9:50:00 AM
the rythym of the clock repeated with each stanza is very creative! nice work! Sue! Jim
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Date: 6/4/2009 9:40:00 AM
intresting write but kept me reading nice flow
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