Clocks

Constant ticks follow tocks Causing seconds to pass Count the precious moments Cherish every hour Chimes tell the time of day Can you hear the alarm? Come, let us awaken! -- 8/23/16

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/26/2016 12:49:00 PM

Back with congratulations, Joseph; I had no doubt that thus would fly high! Regards // paul

Afzal Nusker

Date: 8/26/2016 5:05:00 AM

Wow very well described. Congratulations on your win, Joseph.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2016 3:59:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Joseph :) - hugs and :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/26/2016 3:10:00 AM

In that sense the clocks are quite alarming. But we should wake up more often to enjoy the precious moments. Congratulations, Kai

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/26/2016 12:30:00 AM

Congratulations on finding the time to write this winning piece, Joseph. regards, Viv

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2016 9:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your deserved third placement Joseph! Well done! 7 ; )

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/25/2016 8:14:00 PM

Joseph, your 1st line was a perfect start to your well written Pleiades! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings!

Joseph May
Date: 8/25/2016 9:16:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Kim...

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/25/2016 6:33:00 PM

Joseph, congratulations on your 3rd Place win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! Nicely done! Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2016 5:02:00 PM

You ticked all the right boxes with this one Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton

Date: 8/25/2016 4:44:00 PM

Well done, congrats on your fine win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2016 3:06:00 PM

Clocks can drive you nutty if it's late at night and all you can hear is the tick tock of them. Good topic you wrote about, Joseph

Paul Callus

Date: 8/25/2016 10:30:00 AM

This happens to be one of the best entries in this contest, Joseph. It flows smoothly and it comes with a superb ending. I see a sure winner! Regards // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/25/2016 6:05:00 AM

Excellent. Well done. Thanks for sharing it,

Daver Austin

Date: 8/24/2016 1:09:00 PM

The time is now. Great message. daver