Joseph May Poet Verse

Clocks

Constant ticks follow tocks
 Causing seconds to pass
 Count the precious moments
 Cherish every hour
 Chimes  tell the time of day
 Can you hear the alarm?
 Come, let us awaken!
              --   
 8/23/16

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Paul Callus August 26, 2016 at 12:49 PM Back with congratulations, Joseph; I had no doubt that thus would fly high! Regards // paul

Afzal Nusker August 26, 2016 at 5:05 AM Wow very well described. Congratulations on your win, Joseph.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 26, 2016 at 3:59 AM - Congratulations on your winning poems, Joseph :) - hugs and :)

Kai Michael Neumann August 26, 2016 at 3:10 AM In that sense the clocks are quite alarming. But we should wake up more often to enjoy the precious moments. Congratulations, Kai

Viv Wigley August 26, 2016 at 12:30 AM Congratulations on finding the time to write this winning piece, Joseph. regards, Viv

Connie Marcum Wong August 25, 2016 at 9:35 PM Congratulations on your deserved third placement Joseph! Well done! 7 ; )

Kim Merryman August 25, 2016 at 8:14 PM Joseph, your 1st line was a perfect start to your well written Pleiades! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings! Joseph May August 25, 2016 at 9:16 PM Thank you for my placement Kim...

Sandra Haight August 25, 2016 at 6:33 PM Joseph, congratulations on your 3rd Place win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! Nicely done! Sandra

Jan Allison August 25, 2016 at 5:02 PM You ticked all the right boxes with this one Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton August 25, 2016 at 4:44 PM Well done, congrats on your fine win!

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2016 at 3:06 PM Clocks can drive you nutty if it's late at night and all you can hear is the tick tock of them. Good topic you wrote about, Joseph

Paul Callus August 25, 2016 at 10:30 AM This happens to be one of the best entries in this contest, Joseph. It flows smoothly and it comes with a superb ending. I see a sure winner! Regards // paul

Ravi Sathasivam August 25, 2016 at 6:05 AM Excellent. Well done. Thanks for sharing it,

Daver Austin August 24, 2016 at 1:09 PM The time is now. Great message. daver