Sabahat Batool Poet Rhyme

Clock

Clock of time thy hands go faster
Faster than the Moon and sun
Dreams and hopes with thee they linger
O thou lonesome forlorn singer
Hearts of people full of sorrow
With the funerals of the shadows
In the circle of Thy tick tick
Midst of sorrow midst of fun
Wait and linger walk and stagger

Till to  graves all of them run

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W J Clarke June 19, 2023 at 12:31 PM You have created a really beautiful cleverly constructed timeless piece. It really held my attention as I was reading it. Congratulations, Sabahat :-) Sabahat Batool June 19, 2023 at 11:50 PM Loads of Thanks W J Clarke, art is timeless but we are fleeting

John Lawless June 17, 2023 at 3:45 PM i shall never look at the face of the clock the same.....beautiful piece reflecting on the tortures of time Sabahat Batool June 17, 2023 at 10:44 PM Thanks John Lawless

Brandy Nicole June 16, 2023 at 8:25 PM Time does move so quickly. We need to cherish each and every precious moment. Congratulations Sabahat, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:41 PM Loads of Thanks Brandy Nicole for your beauteous words

Panagiota Romios June 16, 2023 at 8:08 PM Hi Sabahat, A very dramatic poem, Cheers on getting the POTD. I know how fun that is. Pangie Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:41 PM Loads of Thanks Romios

Michael Tor June 16, 2023 at 4:42 PM Congratulations on receiving POTD Honors. Love your theme and message... Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:43 PM Michael bundles of Thanks, it's the beauty of your inner self which reflects in everything you see

Jim Slaughter June 16, 2023 at 11:04 AM Well, they do say that "time flies". Congrats on POTD, Sabahat. Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:44 PM Thanks Time flies no doubt. It's like a wave which never touch the shore again

Daisy Meadows June 16, 2023 at 10:49 AM Congratulations on your POTD. Well done. Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:45 PM Loads of Thanks Jeanette

Darlene De Beaulieu June 16, 2023 at 10:05 AM Hello Sabahat, So nice tomeet you. Congratulations on the POTD. I enjoyed to read your poetry. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\ Darlene De Beaulieu June 17, 2023 at 11:01 AM Hello Sabahat, you are welcome. Enjoy your day. My friend./Darlene\ Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:45 PM Loads of Thanks Darlene

Paula Goldsmith June 16, 2023 at 9:39 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed day writing away................. Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:47 PM Thanks Paula Goldsmith

Arastu Goyal June 16, 2023 at 8:45 AM Enjoyed reading this and loved your concept of time. Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:47 PM Thanks Goyal

Kim Rodrigues June 16, 2023 at 8:32 AM I could imagine a narrator starting his movie with this poem to set the mood… Congratulations on POTD! Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:48 PM Thanks Kim , so nice of you

Stephan McBride June 16, 2023 at 7:29 AM Congratulations on POTD, what a great depth of meaning in your poem Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:48 PM Loads of Thanks

Susan Lawrence June 16, 2023 at 6:58 AM Poignant, intense and powerful images and emotions in your poem Sabahat ! Congratulations on your POTD. Susan :) Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:49 PM Loads of Thanks Susan

Warren Doll June 16, 2023 at 6:08 AM Sabahat, congratulations on POTD~ Warren Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:49 PM Thank you so much

Joseph May June 16, 2023 at 5:53 AM Time tells the story, Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:50 PM Loads of Thanks

Vijay Pandit June 16, 2023 at 5:09 AM Back with BIG congrats on your well deserved POTD, Sabahat. Enjoy your special day today. Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:50 PM Loads of Thanks Vijay Pandit, I'm obliged

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 16, 2023 at 4:59 AM Splendid piece Sabahat! A fave for me too. Congratulations on POTD honours, enjoy your day! xomo Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:51 PM Thanks Maureen, have a nice day

Mike Gentile June 16, 2023 at 4:03 AM Congratulations Sabahat on your POTD honors!! enjoy your day! Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:51 PM Thanks Mike

Tania Kitchin June 16, 2023 at 3:40 AM Sabahat, I enjoyed your poem, congratulations on POTD! Sabahat Batool June 16, 2023 at 10:52 PM Thanks Tania

Vijay Pandit June 15, 2023 at 6:59 AM Your poems are always fabulous. This among many. Awesome! A FAVE! Sabahat Batool June 15, 2023 at 8:43 PM Loads of Thanks Vijay Pandit