Clock

Clock of time thy hands go faster Faster than the Moon and sun Dreams and hopes with thee they linger O thou lonesome forlorn singer Hearts of people full of sorrow With the funerals of the shadows In the circle of Thy tick tick Midst of sorrow midst of fun Wait and linger walk and stagger Till to graves all of them run

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W J Clarke

Date: 6/19/2023 12:31:00 PM

You have created a really beautiful cleverly constructed timeless piece. It really held my attention as I was reading it. Congratulations, Sabahat :-)

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/19/2023 11:50:00 PM

Loads of Thanks W J Clarke, art is timeless but we are fleeting

John Lawless

Date: 6/17/2023 3:45:00 PM

i shall never look at the face of the clock the same.....beautiful piece reflecting on the tortures of time

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/17/2023 10:44:00 PM

Thanks John Lawless

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/16/2023 8:25:00 PM

Time does move so quickly. We need to cherish each and every precious moment. Congratulations Sabahat, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:41:00 PM

Loads of Thanks Brandy Nicole for your beauteous words

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/16/2023 8:08:00 PM

Hi Sabahat, A very dramatic poem, Cheers on getting the POTD. I know how fun that is. Pangie

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:41:00 PM

Loads of Thanks Romios

Michael Tor

Date: 6/16/2023 4:42:00 PM

Congratulations on receiving POTD Honors. Love your theme and message...

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:43:00 PM

Michael bundles of Thanks, it's the beauty of your inner self which reflects in everything you see

Jim Slaughter

Date: 6/16/2023 11:04:00 AM

Well, they do say that "time flies". Congrats on POTD, Sabahat.

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:44:00 PM

Thanks Time flies no doubt. It's like a wave which never touch the shore again

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 6/16/2023 10:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:45:00 PM

Loads of Thanks Jeanette

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/16/2023 10:05:00 AM

Hello Sabahat, So nice tomeet you. Congratulations on the POTD. I enjoyed to read your poetry. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/17/2023 11:01:00 AM

Hello Sabahat, you are welcome. Enjoy your day. My friend./Darlene\

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:45:00 PM

Loads of Thanks Darlene

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/16/2023 9:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:47:00 PM

Thanks Paula Goldsmith

Arastu Goyal

Date: 6/16/2023 8:45:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this and loved your concept of time.

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:47:00 PM

Thanks Goyal

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/16/2023 8:32:00 AM

I could imagine a narrator starting his movie with this poem to set the mood… Congratulations on POTD!

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:48:00 PM

Thanks Kim , so nice of you

Stephan McBride

Date: 6/16/2023 7:29:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD, what a great depth of meaning in your poem

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:48:00 PM

Loads of Thanks

Susan Lawrence

Date: 6/16/2023 6:58:00 AM

Poignant, intense and powerful images and emotions in your poem Sabahat ! Congratulations on your POTD. Susan :)

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:49:00 PM

Loads of Thanks Susan

Warren Doll

Date: 6/16/2023 6:08:00 AM

Sabahat, congratulations on POTD~ Warren

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:49:00 PM

Thank you so much

Joseph May

Date: 6/16/2023 5:53:00 AM

Time tells the story, Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:50:00 PM

Loads of Thanks

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/16/2023 5:09:00 AM

Back with BIG congrats on your well deserved POTD, Sabahat. Enjoy your special day today.

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:50:00 PM

Loads of Thanks Vijay Pandit, I'm obliged

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/16/2023 4:59:00 AM

Splendid piece Sabahat! A fave for me too. Congratulations on POTD honours, enjoy your day! xomo

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:51:00 PM

Thanks Maureen, have a nice day

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/16/2023 4:03:00 AM

Congratulations Sabahat on your POTD honors!! enjoy your day!

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:51:00 PM

Thanks Mike

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/16/2023 3:40:00 AM

Sabahat, I enjoyed your poem, congratulations on POTD!

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/16/2023 10:52:00 PM

Thanks Tania

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/15/2023 6:59:00 AM

Your poems are always fabulous. This among many. Awesome! A FAVE!

Sabahat Batool
Date: 6/15/2023 8:43:00 PM

Loads of Thanks Vijay Pandit