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Clock

Clock of time thy hands go faster
Faster than the Moon and sun
Dreams and hopes with thee they linger
O thou lonesome forlorn singer
Hearts of people full of sorrow
With the funerals of the shadows
In the circle of Thy tick tick
Midst of sorrow midst of fun
Wait and linger walk and stagger

Till to  graves all of them run

Copyright © Sabahat Batool | Year Posted 2023

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W J Clarke Date: 6/19/2023 12:31:00 PM You have created a really beautiful cleverly constructed timeless piece. It really held my attention as I was reading it. Congratulations, Sabahat :-) Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/19/2023 11:50:00 PM Loads of Thanks W J Clarke, art is timeless but we are fleeting

John Lawless Date: 6/17/2023 3:45:00 PM i shall never look at the face of the clock the same.....beautiful piece reflecting on the tortures of time Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/17/2023 10:44:00 PM Thanks John Lawless

Brandy Nicole Date: 6/16/2023 8:25:00 PM Time does move so quickly. We need to cherish each and every precious moment. Congratulations Sabahat, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:41:00 PM Loads of Thanks Brandy Nicole for your beauteous words

Panagiota Romios Date: 6/16/2023 8:08:00 PM Hi Sabahat, A very dramatic poem, Cheers on getting the POTD. I know how fun that is. Pangie Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:41:00 PM Loads of Thanks Romios

Michael Tor Date: 6/16/2023 4:42:00 PM Congratulations on receiving POTD Honors. Love your theme and message... Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:43:00 PM Michael bundles of Thanks, it's the beauty of your inner self which reflects in everything you see

Jim Slaughter Date: 6/16/2023 11:04:00 AM Well, they do say that "time flies". Congrats on POTD, Sabahat. Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:44:00 PM Thanks Time flies no doubt. It's like a wave which never touch the shore again

Daisy Meadows Date: 6/16/2023 10:49:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD. Well done. Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:45:00 PM Loads of Thanks Jeanette

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/16/2023 10:05:00 AM Hello Sabahat, So nice tomeet you. Congratulations on the POTD. I enjoyed to read your poetry. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\ Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/17/2023 11:01:00 AM Hello Sabahat, you are welcome. Enjoy your day. My friend./Darlene\ Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:45:00 PM Loads of Thanks Darlene

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/16/2023 9:39:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed day writing away................. Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:47:00 PM Thanks Paula Goldsmith

Arastu Goyal Date: 6/16/2023 8:45:00 AM Enjoyed reading this and loved your concept of time. Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:47:00 PM Thanks Goyal

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/16/2023 8:32:00 AM I could imagine a narrator starting his movie with this poem to set the mood… Congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:48:00 PM Thanks Kim , so nice of you

Stephan McBride Date: 6/16/2023 7:29:00 AM Congratulations on POTD, what a great depth of meaning in your poem Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:48:00 PM Loads of Thanks

Susan Lawrence Date: 6/16/2023 6:58:00 AM Poignant, intense and powerful images and emotions in your poem Sabahat ! Congratulations on your POTD. Susan :) Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:49:00 PM Loads of Thanks Susan

Warren Doll Date: 6/16/2023 6:08:00 AM Sabahat, congratulations on POTD~ Warren Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:49:00 PM Thank you so much

Joseph May Date: 6/16/2023 5:53:00 AM Time tells the story, Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:50:00 PM Loads of Thanks

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/16/2023 5:09:00 AM Back with BIG congrats on your well deserved POTD, Sabahat. Enjoy your special day today. Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:50:00 PM Loads of Thanks Vijay Pandit, I'm obliged

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/16/2023 4:59:00 AM Splendid piece Sabahat! A fave for me too. Congratulations on POTD honours, enjoy your day! xomo Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:51:00 PM Thanks Maureen, have a nice day

Mike Gentile Date: 6/16/2023 4:03:00 AM Congratulations Sabahat on your POTD honors!! enjoy your day! Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:51:00 PM Thanks Mike

Tania Kitchin Date: 6/16/2023 3:40:00 AM Sabahat, I enjoyed your poem, congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/16/2023 10:52:00 PM Thanks Tania

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/15/2023 6:59:00 AM Your poems are always fabulous. This among many. Awesome! A FAVE! Login to Reply Sabahat Batool Date: 6/15/2023 8:43:00 PM Loads of Thanks Vijay Pandit