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Clipped Wings

They think it “cute” when I do my perched two step not so much when I repeat words I wasn’t meant to hear. They took the mirror out “It confuses him”, they said “He thinks it’s another bird” Not so!! When I pecked its vacant eyes it didn’t flinch, or fly. I plot my escape! I’ve heard them speak of one who made it through an open door into the trees. I dream, of unclipped wings of sunshine and wind of flight and foreign feathers. I loathe the millet stick rewards for inane, un-bird like behavior and wonder why would any “Caged bird sing.”* ©10/18/2019 Writing Challenge, October, 2019 – Bird- Sponsor, Dear Heart – Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 10/25/2019 6:26:00 PM
John, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve
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John Lawless
Date: 10/26/2019 5:35:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I've always wanted to let the caged animals out....
Date: 10/22/2019 11:32:00 AM
John congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this engaging poem!
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John Lawless
Date: 10/26/2019 5:35:00 AM
Thank you Dear Heart....always an interesting theme to your contests to tickle the muse.
Date: 10/20/2019 5:52:00 PM
love your take on the theme a real birds eye view John:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/18/2019 7:46:00 PM
G'day John … in my younger years I caged birds, and these days I keep musing; 'What was I thinking!' Your verse is great, but I feel so guilty - thanks John - Lindsay
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John Lawless
Date: 10/19/2019 7:13:00 PM
Laurie, I had a foul (no pun intended) mouthed parakeet who learned profanity sitting on my shoulders watching football games and the news....
Date: 10/18/2019 9:22:00 AM
i love this perspective from a "caged bird"'s point of view...you gave him a great voice and probably with great accuracy as to his thoughts.... wonderful write, i enjoyed this one :) hugs
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John Lawless
Date: 10/18/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, appreciate you stopping by to read and comment.

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