Clinging Tenuously

lone leaf left clinging

   tenuously to its twig

      wind whistles away



             November 06, 2019
A Late Fall or Early Winter Haiku Poetry Contest
           Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
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Hinshaw Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:32 AM
Gershon, hearty congrats re your well-deserved win for this beauty and many thanks for your kind comments re my entry. Best on you -Bob
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 12:03 PM
Thank you for the congrats, Bob! Cheers, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 7:01 AM
Congrats on your top win, Gershon. Great imagery.
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 12:03 PM
Thank you so much for noticing, Line! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 4:28 AM
I always feel sorry for this one.
Wolf Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 7:44 PM
You, O'Henry, and I all feel sorry for 'the Last Leaf!' Smiles, Gershon
Allison Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 4:07 PM
just LOVE the imagery GW!!!many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 7:45 PM
Jan, thanks for your enthusiastic support, for noticing my placement, and for the congrats! Greatly appreciated. Cheers, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations on your win. It is hard to be the last one to leave....
Wolf Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Thank you for 'leaving' a comment, Paula! Smiles, Gershon
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 8:05 AM
Splendid haiku! Congratulations on your top win Wolf Man, xomo!
Wolf Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 2:11 PM
Hey, thanks for thanking the Wolfman, M.M! ~ Jack
Ravidas Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 5:05 AM
If komrade says thin thing it means thing is thin) Congrats on win, Wolf.
Wolf Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Da, koneshno! Obizatelno! ~ V'cevo C'chactlivo, Kapitan! ~ gw
Andresen Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 4:38 AM
- Congratulations on your great win, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 2:09 PM
Thanks for noticing and taking time to send congrats, Anne-Lise. Cheers, Gershson
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:48 PM
this is a very well written haiku, Gershon. Congrats on a well deserved win
Wolf Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 9:16 PM
Appreciate your thoughtful comment, Andrea, and thanks for noticing my entry and for the congrats! Cheers, Gershon
Sands Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:30 PM
Congratulations for your great win Gershon! Well deserved :)
Wolf Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 9:16 PM
Thank you so much for the congrats, Heidi. Blessings, Gershon
Messina Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Great imagery Gershon, Congratulations on your top win in Tania's contest. Whilst the wind whistles! Charlie
Wolf Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 9:15 PM
Hey, Charlie. Thanks for noticing my entry and for the congrats. Much appreciated. Cheers, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Deserving of win! Congratulations!
Wolf Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 9:15 PM
Hey, thanks for noticing, Kim! Warmest wishes, Gershon
Kitchin Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Gershon, congratulations on your top placement in the contest with your beautifully penned haiku and thanks for participating!
Wolf Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 9:14 PM
Thank YOU Tania for really inspiring all of us with a great idea for a contest! Warm wishes, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:38 AM
Love the image and the title!
Ravidas Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 4:16 AM
Thin thing. Exquisite haiku.
Wolf Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 2:20 PM
I'm branching out as my hair is thinning out. LOL. Thanks, Komrade! Cheers, gw
Sands Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 10:51 PM
A lonely leaf left, in this beautiful Haiku! It will join the others soon :)
Wolf Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 2:17 PM
Yes, it will surely go the way of all leaves. ~ Lefty Wolf (I am left-handed, btw).
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