Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Clinger

The thick damp fog came in a rush
Coats trees, small shrubs, and grass
Vision limited, time slower
Or is time wrapped or trapped

The weighted air holds roosters' crow
And Sparrows' chirp lingers
Dust damp wet hardly leaves the ground
Weighted thoughts now clinger 

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Poet Destroyer A May 21, 2014 at 2:02 PM Sara, hope you are fine..... Stopping by to enjoy this write... I like the way you paint the fog rushing in . I enjoyed the Stunning Imagery.... XOX~ LINDA

Ken Carroll May 21, 2014 at 10:20 AM A lovely mystical write Sara!

Ravi Sathasivam May 21, 2014 at 12:57 AM Poignant write, done beautifully. Enjoyed. Tfs

Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2014 at 3:56 PM clinger is sure a great name for it, Sara. Very descriptive of fog.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 20, 2014 at 12:49 PM - As a bridal veil ..... also some "magical" - but beautiful - Love it, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 20, 2014 at 12:31 PM :) a vivid reflection of how the effects of fog.. :) GBU, from Olive thanks for dropping by and reading my stuff. :)

Carolyn Devonshire May 20, 2014 at 11:13 AM Dear Sara, When a cover of fog appears, things do seem to go slower. Perhaps it's because we can't see the sun moving across the sky. Quite an astute observation, my friend. This is headed to my faves. Excellent! Love, Carolyn

Kim Van Breda May 20, 2014 at 10:31 AM This is a beautiful poignant write Sara. I enjoyed stopping by to read this 'wistful' poem. Xx~Xx