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Climbing down

I've carried time like a coffin — an eternity. Feels heavier than dark gravity Devotion that cruel peculiarity; in me, it shattered — clarity now it's just deathly polarity. Structured, then... infirmity Silence bloated with verbosity! Thank you expendability to reach low generality; close my chest cavity With immensurability, blessed by fate's absurd decree I kiss the edge of certainty. My unthinkability — death offers no pity, It's just a bullet labeled tragedy. To me... Finally

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/13/2025 10:20:00 AM

Death is but the vehicle that takes us home. Only your body will die, not YOU. Trust, you will feel 'heavenly', better than you ever did inside your body (pardon the heavenly pun.) For me the sadness is the thought of leaving my son and possibly my beloved man here without me. It was healthy for you to spill your issues with death, therapeutic and your fears are certainly very 'human'. A deep emotive write, Scorpion man. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/15/2025 11:48:00 AM

Someone told me once the best self therapitizing you can do is writing. Her word not mine, but she is absolutely right! I appreciate the hug :) A.S.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/15/2025 10:17:00 AM

Someone told me once the best self therapitizing you can do is writing. Her word not mine, but she is absolutely right! I appreciate the hug :) A.S.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/15/2025 10:17:00 AM

Someone told me once the best self therapitizing you can do is writing. Her word not mine, but she is absolutely right! I appreciate the hug :) A.S.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/15/2025 8:24:00 AM

Someone told me once the best self therapitizing you can do is writing. Her word not mine, but she is absolutely right! I appreciate the hug :) A.S.

Lin Lane

Date: 5/13/2025 5:56:00 AM

I would not take kindly to death chasing me down, but to it's end I cannot claim neutrality. Great use of ending sounds, Scorpio.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/13/2025 9:57:00 AM

Certainly not a desirable race to lose, the finish line might be at a different location, but every single one of us will cross it. I appreciate the kind words very much. Thank you Lin! A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 5/12/2025 7:47:00 PM

Very deep, with brevity- a cut through write <3

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/12/2025 7:52:00 PM

Death at some point it becomes us all, sometimes the butcher sometimes the requisitioner. I hate it in all forms! #Hugs A.S.