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Climbing a Fence

Out walking one morning I found a fence blocking my path I wondered if it was to keep me out, or to keep something in.. With a hole in my pants, I continued my adventure

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Rockman Pritts

Date: 1/16/2013 12:22:00 AM

Ok. I've read the previous comments. I don't do shmooze. But I do have to admit that I like the thought purveyed in the poem. You have a talent and an insight that you can use to your benefit. Dig a little deeper and you will find the well. Rockman :-)`

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/14/2013 3:46:00 AM

That is the spirit: Obstacles are there to be overcomed! A beautiful message well expressed! Thank you

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/13/2013 11:08:00 PM

I think we both found the same fence *lol* check out my poem excuses Excuses.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/13/2013 2:25:00 PM

lol, had a chuckle here - and congrats on your wins : )

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/13/2013 12:53:00 AM

Lovely write BG! I like the thought provoking wondering and the will to pursue adventure no matter the obstacle put in place. Well penned!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2013 1:45:00 PM

that was cool how you ended it, with a hole in your pants. So we KNOW you went over that fence. Perfect!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/11/2013 5:09:00 AM

I hope you did not discover anything sinister on the other side of the barbed Wire. It's kind of cool when you think that the wire used to keep you out actualy shares your name. Fun Poem Barb. Thanks for visiting and commenting on my poem.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/7/2013 3:34:00 PM

Dear "Mom" please do not delete This is Kenny writing on Chef's site. It has been too long since I last signed in so I could not sign in as Kenny A Fledgling Poet. My Poems are still on line all 4 of them. Search Poem - Pure Beauty Carolyn Devonshire to read they were written about a year ago. Soup Mail Respectfully, Your x son Kenny

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/7/2013 12:52:00 PM

Wonderful Sijo, BG! Love the touch of humor in it. Love, Annalise

Kash Poet

Date: 1/7/2013 8:40:00 AM

Hahaha...great twist in the last line Barabara!Enjoyed this.Best wishes to you.