Climb With Passion

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Written: November 09, 2023, For Ink Empress Tetractys Contest ___________________________________________ flock of starlings flaps the sky, synchronized then swirl and streak draw dark ink whirls who wink wren half hushed twink tripped through swing farmhouse spins wren chicks chirp falteringly ~ this too learned beyond the sting of the earth's strictness, yank waves carry my emails, news of strong love Checked with HMS.COM ( 1-2-3-4-10)

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:54:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Tetractys poem in Ink Empress contest, Las :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 4:23:00 AM

This is absolutely stunning! Brilliant alliterations and unique diction. I love the way you’ve articulated your words in such a captivating manner and that last line really did hit hard for me. A love poem that is so passionate and so beautiful. I especially love the line opening lines and ending. Its always a pleasure reading your takes, they are well crafted and soulfully impeccable. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved

Paige Hind

Date: 11/12/2023 1:47:00 PM

Powerful love poetry!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/10/2023 11:54:00 AM

- A wonderful view of the sky, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/10/2023 9:41:00 AM

Lol, at your clincher, Lasaad. Nature to man's nature then human nature. It's been a long while since I wrote a Tetractys form. Cheers again, my friend. Aloha, William

Bill Baker

Date: 11/9/2023 9:08:00 PM

Tough form of poetry, my friend. Your entry is well written to form. It should do well. Good luck! Bill