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Climb With Passion

Written: November 09, 2023, For Ink Empress Tetractys Contest
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flock of starlings flaps the sky, synchronized
then swirl and streak
draw dark ink
whirls who
wink
wren
half hushed
twink tripped through
swing farmhouse spins
wren chicks chirp falteringly ~ this too learned
beyond the sting of the earth's strictness, yank
waves carry my
emails, news
of strong
love


Checked with HMS.COM ( 1-2-3-4-10)

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Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2023 at 2:54 AM - Congratulations on your great Tetractys poem in Ink Empress contest, Las :) - hugs

Ink Empress November 18, 2023 at 4:23 AM This is absolutely stunning! Brilliant alliterations and unique diction. I love the way you’ve articulated your words in such a captivating manner and that last line really did hit hard for me. A love poem that is so passionate and so beautiful. I especially love the line opening lines and ending. Its always a pleasure reading your takes, they are well crafted and soulfully impeccable. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved

Paige Hind November 12, 2023 at 1:47 PM Powerful love poetry!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2023 at 11:54 AM - A wonderful view of the sky, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

William Kelii Kekaula November 10, 2023 at 9:41 AM Lol, at your clincher, Lasaad. Nature to man's nature then human nature. It's been a long while since I wrote a Tetractys form. Cheers again, my friend. Aloha, William

Bill Baker November 9, 2023 at 9:08 PM Tough form of poetry, my friend. Your entry is well written to form. It should do well. Good luck! Bill