Climate Woe

burnt fossil fuel
taint of dark fumes fill the sky
earth shield breaking up


14 June 2018
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Gentry Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 11:19 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Gonzales Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 2:18 AM
Thank you Susan! Appreciate much. Regards :)
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:49 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gonzales Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 11:18 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, thank you always for your warm congratulatory remarks! Much appreciated. Best wishes :)
Roper Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Nicely done haiku,Elaine , and so very true. Congratulations on your win ..... Hugs Eve ~' *
Gonzales Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 11:15 PM
Many thanks for taking notice of my haiku Eve! Much appreciated. All the best :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Speaking to my heart with this one. Congratulations on your placement in my contest Elaine! Thank you for your support :) xomo
Gonzales Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 11:12 PM
Thank you so much Maureen! I'm so much pleased with my placement in your contest! Truly appreciate it. Warmest regards :)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:01 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win! This powerful haiku sends a serious message that mankind needs to stop harming the Earth and start taking protective measures! Hugs and blessings. Pandita
Gonzales Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 11:07 PM
Thanks a lot Pandita! Truly this is a serious concern. Best regards :)
La France Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:00 AM
Elaine, congratulations on your placement in the contest with this wonderful haiku. Hope all is well with you. Constance
Gonzales Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 10:58 PM
Thank you so much Constance for your visit and congratulatory remark! All is well with me thank you. Hope you are okay as well. Best wishes :)
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