Cliff

Cliff On sea cliffs walks a breath of grace Windswept wonder splashed on her face Sun shadows dance around her feet, Delight in this sandy retreat, Green parasol, like flower blooms Floral scents and ocean perfumes, Flowing spice of the salty air, Carefree breeze tugs curls in her hair. Wind song of the sea sings in riffs From hiding places runs up cliffs Chases sunlight - l’apres midi – Sea shanty chorus, whimsy free, Ruffles chaste lace of petticoats Playful whiffs ‘round her bonnet float Bluffs of pink granite precipice Sports wild poppies, crinolines crisp. Palisade crags – coast of flowers - Begs delight from her leisure hours Spreads her a cape of boutons d’or, Golden bouquet – beauty implores - Playful cloud shadows, like sea drift, Hug windy paths upon the cliff Grace strolls in afternoon’s repose Blossom of the Fleurie Coast rose. 1-25-22 Contest: C Form - Couplet Sponsor: Constance La France Based on Monet’s painting of Madame Monet at Trouville France. Trouville is a resort city in Normandy that is part of the Fleurie Coast – Coast of Flowers.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/1/2022 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "wonderful" story/write. Love This One. Have a blessed day writing away................

Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/2/2022 10:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Paula! This is one of my favorite Monet paintings. Was such fun to put the painting into a word portrait! One thing that struck me was the depiction of the flowers. Always catches my eye. Sending you blessings for your creative pen!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/31/2022 6:24:00 AM

"Palisade crags – coast of flowers - Begs delight from her leisure hours" - Great illustration. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/2/2022 10:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris! There is such wonderful movement in this painting that translated so easily into a portrait of the portrait. I feel the wind, the sun, the scent of the flowers and sea and the glow of pleasure on Madame Monet's face. Blessings to you!

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/31/2022 6:13:00 AM

Sam, congratulations on winning the contest with your beautifully written poem.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/2/2022 10:29:00 AM

Many thanks coming your way Lasaad! I so appreciate your feedback and congratulations! Sending you blessings of gratitude.

Constance La France

Date: 1/30/2022 2:58:00 PM

Sam, congratulations on your Second Place win in my C Forms - Couplet contest with your wonderfully penned poem ~Constance

Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/2/2022 10:28:00 AM

Thank you so much Constance. The C Form was a wonderful opportunity to showcase Monet's enchanting painting - one of my favorites. Thank you for this inspiring contest and your generous placement among so many wonderful poems! Sending blessings of gratitude and peace.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/29/2022 1:35:00 PM

Hi Sam you write wonderful poetry and so creatively and always thought provoking. Hugs and Blessings Jennifer

Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/2/2022 10:24:00 AM

Hi Jennifer! What a lovely message dear friend! I am humbled and honored. I have to admit that if it weren't for the soup, and all of you, I would still be writing in my most comfortable style. Thank you for helping me to stretch and grow! And, I have to give credit to our wonderful, whimsical, inspirational Holy Spirit who often gives me a swift kick in the inspiration! Sending you blessings of gratitude, prayers and hugs!

Gary Radice

Date: 1/27/2022 10:18:00 AM

Hi Sam. I'm not sure it's the same picture but I've seen a painting by Monet of his wife (I think at Trouville) I saw it at the National Gallery in London. I believe it was painted on their honeymoon?? Whether I have the right picture or not your impression of Monet's impression makes for an excellent read! :) Cheers - Gary

Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/2/2022 10:17:00 AM

Gary, you are correct my friend. How wonderful that you have seen the original. Wonderful to know some of the painting's history!! Have to admit I have a tinge of jealousy. This painting has always enchanted me. I feel the sea breeze, smell the flowers, and love the way Monet captured the stroll on a carefree summer day along with all of the blue tones. So glad you enjoyed this poem. All the best. Cheers!