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Clickety Clack the Wheels On the Track

The smell of a steam train passing me by The roar of the engine brings a tear to my eye Such dear childhood memories of when you and I would watch from our garden smoke rising so high The “clickety-clack” of the wheels on the track as the engine emerged from a tunnel so black Ma would despair as the smuts in the air would stick to her washing she’d just hung out there Now longing to see an engine so free It was almost alive Such a monster to drive A magnificent sight It would truly delight In plush wooden carriages we travelled afar An adventure each time with our Ma and our Pa So much nicer than driving our old battered car But trains of today have nothing to offer Overcrowded are they and they all look the same for nothing compares to a real live steam train 'cept maybe a Bullet Train I rode in Japan so long, sleek and white just like Concord on rails It was fast it was sleek it was comfy and clean but I somehow still yearn for that smell of the steam ~~~~ do you know what I mean... Written 28th October 2021 Contest Railroads an historical glance back Sponsor BJ Legros Kelley 2nd Place Contest A STRAND (Dec30) Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Date: 12/31/2021 10:40:00 AM
Yes, I do know what you mean! All these reruns of life are never as good as the first times. Congratulations on your big win!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/5/2022 12:10:00 PM
Wow, thank you so much Ann for your kind words. Wishing you and your loved ones a very Happy and Healthy New Year. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 12/30/2021 11:45:00 PM
Reading your work again. Congratulations!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/5/2022 12:08:00 PM
Many thanks dear Christuraj, I appreciate your visits and thank you dear friend. With kindest thoughts and a Happy New Year from Ann xx
Date: 12/30/2021 9:22:00 AM
Ann, congratulations on your win! I do love trains and have had many wonderful and memorable trips on trains. Happy New Year.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/5/2022 12:07:00 PM
Thank you dear Sam, yes like you I love trains, especially steam trains ~ now that is what I call a train ~ for they are truly wonderful to see and to ride in. Sending you and yours good wishes for the forthcoming New Year. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/17/2021 4:50:00 PM
Ann, congratulations on your very high placement of your poem 'Clickety Clack the wheels on the track" in the poetry contest 'Railroads, A Historical Glance Back'. We (myself and those who help me in judging my contests) very much enjoyed your poem! I haven't had the opportunity to ride a steam train, someday maybe we'll have the joy of riding in a historical engine! The Bullet Train sounds amazing! Thank you so much for being a wonderful part of this contest. Again congratulations Ann! ~BJ
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/23/2021 3:05:00 PM
Thank you so much BJ for your wonderful words of encouragement and my placement in your most interesting contest. I appreciate the time taken in sponsoring and judging this great contest ~ thankyou. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/16/2021 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. I Love This Write. I was there with you. Good memories are the best. Enjoy your win with blessings....................
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/17/2021 12:26:00 PM
Dear Paula many thanks for you kind words, I really appreciate them. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/16/2021 5:52:00 AM
"dear childhood memories of when you and I would watch from our garden smoke rising so high The “clickety-clack” of the wheels on the track" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/17/2021 12:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Christuraj for your lovely comments my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/31/2021 10:50:00 AM
Oh the golden age of steam Ann, I remember them well, full of character and the carriages with pictures on the walls. Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/8/2021 3:26:00 PM
Yes Tom, such a joy to ride in, unlike trains of today... thanks for your comments Tom and I hope you and your family are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/28/2021 5:57:00 AM
A train ride is always special as you so lovingly illustrate, Ann. We are big fans of long distance rides here in the US.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/30/2021 11:30:00 AM
Oh yes Vijay old trains especially take me back to another era and I love how beautifully they have been restored to their former glory by folk who love doing it. Thank you for your visit Vijay and I hope you are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/27/2021 10:15:00 PM
I know what you mean. I've seen many trains on my travels. In Malta we do not have trains. It's too small an island.
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Date: 10/28/2021 3:12:00 AM
I love the steam trains and a while back I took my granddaughter on the sister train of the Orient Express, which has been lovingly restored to its former glory. It was simply wonderful like stepping into another world. We went from London to Bath, with brunch and after an interesting tour of Bath on our return trip we had a 5 course dinner - wow that was a truly amazing trip and hauled by a magnificent steam engine.

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