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Cliche'd to Death collaboration with Lin Lane

I'm so tired of hearing that old cliche' ~ "It's water under the bridge," let it go. Those words are never the right thing to say when I'm already feeling kinda low What if water under the bridge dries up and can't carry my mistakes out to sea? To forgiveness should I raise a full cup? What cliche will I hear to comfort me? "To err is human, to forgive, Divine" Yet another cliche' in stark contrast Self forgiveness often takes much more time Only changing the future, not the past Burning bridges is like playing with fire All too often it leads to getting burned Wisdom is the greatest pacifier Cliche's are the lessons others have learned Daniel Turner and Jenna Logan

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Jim Slaughter

Date: 4/6/2023 11:31:00 AM

Love the last line, Daniel. We all live in the past, anyway. Today is the past that just hasn't happened yet. This piece is a very good collab with Jenna.

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/11/2023 4:35:00 AM

Thank you, Jim. She is fun to work with.

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 4/4/2023 5:33:00 PM

What a wonderful work of art. Two hands applying to the same canvas! I have never considered writing with someone. This definitely gives pause to its consideration. Well done to the both of you an extremely enjoyable read! A.S.

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/5/2023 5:26:00 AM

Thank you, AS. They may look easy but they are not. Always glad to have you over. Be well and have a super day.

Paul Bell

Date: 4/4/2023 10:07:00 AM

Picked this cos it was a colab, which can always be difficult, but you both pulled it off.

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/4/2023 11:09:00 AM

Thank you, Paul. Who says two minds are not better than one? Have a wonderful afternoon.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/3/2023 7:42:00 AM

A lovely collaboration in which serious words are delivered with a pinch of wit. Hearing the same cliches can become monotonous, but there's no denying that some do really serve a good purpose! Well done Danny & Jenna. ~ Regards // paul

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/4/2023 11:08:00 AM

Thank you, Paul Your insight is always welcome. Be well my friend;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2023 4:19:00 PM

very very cool, Daniel!! Lots of cliches I do like a lot though. but some of them, it's true, they are meaningless for our situations.

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/4/2023 11:07:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for stopping by to read and comment. Like you, I like some cliches but usually not in poetry. Be well friend:)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/2/2023 2:27:00 AM

Great collab, DT and Jenna, well done:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/2/2023 5:19:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna . Have a great Sunday:)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/1/2023 7:24:00 PM

Don't forget now: 'All's fair in love and war,' and 'Have a good day!' lol. :) gw

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/2/2023 5:19:00 AM

Forget what? LOL Have a great day as well, GW:)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/1/2023 4:54:00 PM

Double the congratulations on this collaboration Jenna and Daniel. If one is good, two is better ;)

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/2/2023 5:17:00 AM

Thank you, Alice. Great to see you this morning.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/1/2023 4:38:00 PM

A marvellous collaboration Daniel and Jenna. Dig an imaginary hole and bury mistakes of the past, then build a future that’s unsurpassed… Belle

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 4:45:00 PM

Thank you, Belle. It's always a pleasure. Hoping you are well:)

Jim Slaughter

Date: 4/1/2023 1:58:00 PM

Love the last line, Daniel...and I couldn't agree more. You and Jenna did an excellent job with this one.

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 2:01:00 PM

Thank you, Jim. Always great to see you sir. have a great evening.

Suzette Richards

Date: 4/1/2023 11:03:00 AM

To kiss and make up, especially when we can enjoy the lovely poem to commemorate the moment, is pure gold. Also, soup mail, Daniel.

Suzette Richards
Date: 4/1/2023 8:35:00 PM

You are welcome:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 11:33:00 AM

Thank you, Suzette. I must have missed the kiss part:) Glad you stopped by! It's always my pleasure. Have a great weekend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2023 8:56:00 AM

If for a contest reads like a winner to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Love means never having to say I am sorry. Sara

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 11:31:00 AM

Thank you, Mrs Sara. Great to see you today. I appreciate your stopping by to read and comment. Have a super weekend:)

Deb M

Date: 4/1/2023 8:49:00 AM

Wonderful poem my friend….bridges built ….time to move on and enjoy! Debx

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 11:29:00 AM

Thanks, Deb. That's right on to the next bridge or fence to mend:) Always glad to see you. Have a wonderful weekend.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 4/1/2023 8:27:00 AM

I don't mind hearing an old or over used cliche, it brings back memories welcomed and not welcomed. They also spoil any effort (if you're a writer) at originality. On the other hand, when they're new and fresh they offer a striking mental image far more concrete than wasteful boring words! / Maurice

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 11:27:00 AM

I agree, Maurice. I know I cliche'd my kids to death' LOL Always a pleasure sir. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment:)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/1/2023 5:35:00 AM

Love that last line…lessons learned by others perhaps should not be our path though we consider the wisdom. God bless!

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 6:16:00 AM

Hello Kim. That's right. We glean the wisdom from the old cliche's. Always a pleasure, Kim Have a wonderful weekend.

Joseph May

Date: 4/1/2023 2:17:00 AM

There is a cliche for everything it seems, Very nice collaboration Daniel and Jenna

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 6:14:00 AM

Hello Joseph. I know there's a bunch of them. Great to see you again. I hope you have a great weekend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2023 1:53:00 AM

- "behind every great man is a great woman" :) ... everyone can change the future but not the past ... well done both - hugs

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 6:10:00 AM

Hello Anne. I appreciate your time and support. Have a wonderful weekend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/31/2023 9:47:00 PM

It's often said life is too short to bear grudges and it's so true. Here's to new beginnings. A well written collaboration Daniel and Jenna. Tom

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 6:09:00 AM

Thanks Tom. Nice of you to drop by and lend your support. Have a super weekend.

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/31/2023 8:01:00 PM

WOW! You two have collaborated it beautifully. Truly an awesome collaboration. I enjoyed from start to finish. Applause… :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 6:04:00 AM

Thank you, Fin. Always happy to see you. Have a special weekend:)

Ann Peck

Date: 3/31/2023 4:56:00 PM

Whatever the bridge was that needed to be rebuilt, you succeeded with your poem! Very beautiful!

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/31/2023 5:41:00 PM

Thank you, Ann. Great to see you. I appreciate your time and support. Have a wonderful weekend:)

Paul Willason

Date: 3/31/2023 2:42:00 PM

A very meaningful poem, rich ground for reflection. I'll take this one away and let my mind chew on its wisdom....an excellent collaborative effort yielding a great result.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/31/2023 3:51:00 PM

Hello Paul. I've always been fond of cliche's. They are usually true. We poets try to avoid them but they do make for good reading once in a while. Have a top shelf weekend my friend.

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/31/2023 2:31:00 PM

Hey you guys! A lot of wisdom in these lines, Both of you are to be commended for showing strength of character, and coming together to collaborate on this conciliatory piece, cheers David

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/31/2023 3:48:00 PM

Thank you, David. We appreiate your support. Pride builds a very high wall. Have a great weekend:)

Patrick Kelly

Date: 3/31/2023 2:26:00 PM

Daniel, I have seen the burning bridge come back and burn the one holding the match many times. Before burning bridges think it over. Usually a fire burns in more than one direction.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/31/2023 3:45:00 PM

Thank you, Patrick. It's a fire that should never be lit:) I appreciate your kindness and support. Have a super weekend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/31/2023 1:47:00 PM

A wonderful write to both of you. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/31/2023 3:43:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. I appreciate you reading and your support. Have a great weekend.

Jenna Logan

Date: 3/31/2023 1:26:00 PM

It was a step that we both should have taken before now. All's well that ends well, Danny.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/31/2023 1:47:00 PM

Welcome.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/31/2023 1:31:00 PM

"Anger is the enemy of non-violence and pride is a monster that swallows it up" Gandhi Thank you, Jenna and be well:)