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Cliche Monoku 5

her wash came out all entwined~she calmly untangled and didn't whine For "Don't Get Your Knickers in a Twist" Monoku

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Mike Hauser

Date: 1/30/2018 10:01:00 AM

Sweet

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/30/2018 8:21:00 PM

Yes, at least this time she didn't have a hissy fit, lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike!~Appreciate it~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/18/2018 8:58:00 PM

Awesome!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/19/2018 7:26:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Kim; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/9/2018 6:36:00 PM

Well done, Cheryl. Congratulations on your 1 liner poem . Hugs Eve ~`*

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/9/2018 8:24:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Eve; Appreciate it! hugs~Che :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2018 6:22:00 PM

Oh, that was a great illustration. VERY VERY clever one, Cheryl. Congrats.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/8/2018 8:14:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Andrea; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2018 1:42:00 PM

- Congratulations Cheryl, on your great second place in the contest :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/6/2018 6:04:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Ann-Lise; appreciate it and hope you have a lovely weekend too! hugs~Che :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/6/2018 11:28:00 AM

Love the musical rhythm. Congrats on your win, Cheryl.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/6/2018 6:03:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Line; appreciate it!~Che :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 1/6/2018 9:51:00 AM

So glad this wonderful whimsical write made the list! Congratulations! Hugs :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/6/2018 5:58:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Mo; appreciate it!~Che :)

Silent One

Date: 1/6/2018 9:24:00 AM

This one was clever Che... Congratulations on your placement in the cliche monoku contest..

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/6/2018 5:57:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and placing me as one of the winners Silent One; appreciate it!~Che :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/5/2018 11:42:00 AM

She has great patience...Great visuals in this monoku...All the best Cheryl

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/5/2018 5:08:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Arturo; Appreciate it!~Che :)

John Gondolf

Date: 1/5/2018 5:07:00 AM

Very witty, Cheryl, the world would be more peaceful if people didn’t complain when things didn’t go their way. Best of luck. John

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/5/2018 5:08:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit John; I totally agree about the complaining! Appreciate it!~Che :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/4/2018 11:14:00 PM

An ingenious and witty monoku, Cheryl. Excellent and best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/5/2018 7:46:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and encouragement Susan; thanks for stop by!~Che :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 1/4/2018 9:37:00 PM

Giggles! Love it!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/5/2018 7:45:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mo; glad you liked it!~Che :)