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Cliche Monoku 5

her wash came out all entwined~she calmly untangled and didn't whine





For "Don't Get Your Knickers in a Twist"
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clothesmoving onmonoku

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Mike Hauser

January 30, 2018 at 10:01 AM

Sweet

Cheryl Hoffman

January 30, 2018 at 8:21 PM

Yes, at least this time she didn't have a hissy fit, lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike!~Appreciate it~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues

January 18, 2018 at 8:58 PM

Awesome!

Cheryl Hoffman

January 19, 2018 at 7:26 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Kim; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Eve Roper

January 9, 2018 at 6:36 PM

Well done, Cheryl. Congratulations on your 1 liner poem . Hugs Eve ~`*

Cheryl Hoffman

January 9, 2018 at 8:24 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Eve; Appreciate it! hugs~Che :)

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2018 at 6:22 PM

Oh, that was a great illustration. VERY VERY clever one, Cheryl. Congrats.

Cheryl Hoffman

January 8, 2018 at 8:14 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Andrea; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 6, 2018 at 1:42 PM

- Congratulations Cheryl, on your great second place in the contest :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman

January 6, 2018 at 6:04 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Ann-Lise; appreciate it and hope you have a lovely weekend too! hugs~Che :)

Line Gauthier

January 6, 2018 at 11:28 AM

Love the musical rhythm. Congrats on your win, Cheryl.

Cheryl Hoffman

January 6, 2018 at 6:03 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Line; appreciate it!~Che :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 6, 2018 at 9:51 AM

So glad this wonderful whimsical write made the list! Congratulations! Hugs :)

Cheryl Hoffman

January 6, 2018 at 5:58 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Mo; appreciate it!~Che :)

Silent One

January 6, 2018 at 9:24 AM

This one was clever Che... Congratulations on your placement in the cliche monoku contest..

Cheryl Hoffman

January 6, 2018 at 5:57 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and placing me as one of the winners Silent One; appreciate it!~Che :)

Arturo Michael

January 5, 2018 at 11:42 AM

She has great patience...Great visuals in this monoku...All the best Cheryl

Cheryl Hoffman

January 5, 2018 at 5:08 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Arturo; Appreciate it!~Che :)

John Gondolf

January 5, 2018 at 5:07 AM

Very witty, Cheryl, the world would be more peaceful if people didn’t complain when things didn’t go their way. Best of luck. John

Cheryl Hoffman

January 5, 2018 at 5:08 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit John; I totally agree about the complaining! Appreciate it!~Che :)

Susan Ashley

January 4, 2018 at 11:14 PM

An ingenious and witty monoku, Cheryl. Excellent and best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Cheryl Hoffman

January 5, 2018 at 7:46 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and encouragement Susan; thanks for stop by!~Che :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 4, 2018 at 9:37 PM

Giggles! Love it!

Cheryl Hoffman

January 5, 2018 at 7:45 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mo; glad you liked it!~Che :)

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