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Cletus O'Toole At the Ball

Cletus O'Toole asked the lady, perchance If she would like to join him for a dance He trampled her toes And rumpled her clothes When asked again she said, "Nope! Not a chance!"

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/18/2019 8:55:00 AM

LOL once was enough. Good one, Robert.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/17/2019 10:00:00 PM

G'day Bob … appears Cletus and I went to the same dancing school - Merry Christmas Bob - Lindsay

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 12/18/2019 4:40:00 PM

Lindsay, I knew I had met you someplace and it was at the same school where you, Cletus and I stepped on some toes!! A Merry Olde Christmas and a Happy, Healthy New Year, Mate!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/17/2019 9:18:00 PM

Aw, what a party pooper that lady is. guess she hasn't applied for Medicare yet, eh?! LOL. Thanks, Bob! :) gw

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/17/2019 8:00:00 PM

Lol! Robert, This is hilarious. I see you have written several with name"Cletus O'Toole. Good name to use in a limerick. I laughed out loud. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Na Na

Date: 12/17/2019 7:51:00 PM

lol very good Limerick :)~