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Cleopatra In Disguise

My Egyptian queen when you walked into my life time stood still waves of bliss, as you flip your long flowing hair . My Egyptian queen black strands are what I envision come, take a ride with me on this, loves first expedition. Dangerously seductive and beautiful, powerful, my jazzy-bell, I should be fleeing my attraction grows but you belong to me.. My Egyptian queen in your eyes I see no weakness all I see is power, your independence, your strength and charisma. Every thought I posses, every move I am willing to grant, you are one step ahead, retaliating ecstasy on me. My Egyptian queen I would like to be your king, together we can rise. To explore, conquer and expand our love, bring light into darkness. My Egyptian queen I am inside you know, your walls enclosed around me, waves of pleasure consume, my boat is sailing all seven seas. My exploration of the great folds are complete my focus is now the great manila plains. My Egyptian queen your body is my temple filling your insides with gold and jewels happiness grows with every layer building to a spectacular finish. We shall be together for eternity and together begin to rise I am fortunate to have you my Cleopatra in Disguise.. Jared Pickett 4/24/2010 Asavvvy1

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Date: 5/11/2010 8:03:00 PM
A beautiful, nice and sensual journey with passion and emotions. Wonderful write my friend. And many thank for your precious comments on Patradoot 'the Messenger'. Love and best wishes, .......Ravindra... Jared Pickett.
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Date: 5/3/2010 6:30:00 AM
enjoyed reaidng today on this rainy dark day.
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Date: 5/2/2010 3:12:00 PM
Do you know how ugly the real Cleo was? LOL ... we can all fantasize with this one ... very sexy writing, Jared ... makes me smile!!
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Date: 1/21/2023 3:26:00 AM
Ugliness is in the eye of the beholder! Question, were you alive during the time of Cleopatra? how do actually know besides what google tells you! Anyways, thank you for your comment. Much love Asavvy1
Date: 4/29/2010 7:10:00 AM
Very nice and sensual...love your underlying meanings...cool...Marty
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Date: 4/28/2010 12:15:00 PM
Thanks for the comments on my Sestina...First write of that kind..Interesting thoughts that you have penned here...Sara
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Date: 4/28/2010 12:04:00 PM
Hi Jared. Thank you for your comments but I am withdrawing my poem to redo. Is that okay with you? I did not follow all of the rules but used my 6 words in random order. I am not sure I can rearrange it, but am going to try. Love, and thank you again. Joyce
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:36:00 PM
Very sexy piece Mr. J. and penned so well with passion and emotion and seductiveness beyond compare.. enjoyed reading this extremely written creative write for my reading pleasure today... appreciate your HM for Volatility in The Gahzal contest... it was a hard composition but then I would not have it any other way ..if u get my drift... the winning entries were wisely chosen so thankxxx for considering my work one of your favorite reads... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:33:00 PM
Very sensual and creative, beautifully written..enjoyed...Allie
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Date: 4/25/2010 9:22:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem dear Friend,Its sensual and beautiful..Cleopatra was a beautiful,Sensual and a Woman of Wisdom.,,A capturer of Men's attention..I think your Cleopatra captured your heart quite well..I wonder if she does the belly dancing too:)..Beautiful poem..nice tribute..original ideas..Charma
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Date: 4/24/2010 6:59:00 PM
I like this one alot, even the sexual part, it was quite tastefully done! Loved the seven seas part! Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/24/2010 10:00:00 AM
nice tribute.. and very well written my friend!!
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