Cleopatra In Disguise

My Egyptian queen
when you walked into my life time stood still
waves of bliss,
as you flip your long flowing hair .

My Egyptian queen
black strands are what I envision
come, take a ride with me on this,
loves first expedition.

Dangerously seductive and beautiful,
powerful, my jazzy-bell, I should be fleeing
my attraction grows
but you belong to me..

My Egyptian queen
in your eyes I see no weakness
all I see is power, your independence,
your strength and charisma.

Every thought I posses, every move I am willing to grant,
you are one step ahead, retaliating ecstasy on me.

My Egyptian queen
I would like to be your king, together we can rise.
To explore, conquer and expand our love,
bring light into darkness.

My Egyptian queen
I am inside you know,
your walls enclosed around me,
waves of pleasure consume,
my boat is sailing all seven seas.
My exploration of the great folds are complete
my focus is now the great manila plains.

My Egyptian queen 
your body is my temple
filling your insides with gold and jewels 
happiness grows with every layer 
building to a spectacular finish.

We shall be together for eternity
and together begin to rise
I am fortunate to have you
my Cleopatra in Disguise..

Jared Pickett
4/24/2010
Asavvvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kapoor Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 8:03 PM
A beautiful, nice and sensual journey with passion and emotions. Wonderful write my friend. And many thank for your precious comments on Patradoot 'the Messenger'. Love and best wishes, .......Ravindra... Jared Pickett.
Culverhouse Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 6:30 AM
enjoyed reaidng today on this rainy dark day.
Mason Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Do you know how ugly the real Cleo was? LOL ... we can all fantasize with this one ... very sexy writing, Jared ... makes me smile!!
Pickett Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 3:26 AM
Ugliness is in the eye of the beholder! Question, were you alive during the time of Cleopatra? how do actually know besides what google tells you! Anyways, thank you for your comment. Much love Asavvy1
Owens Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 7:10 AM
Very nice and sensual...love your underlying meanings...cool...Marty
Kendrick Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Thanks for the comments on my Sestina...First write of that kind..Interesting thoughts that you have penned here...Sara
Johnson Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Hi Jared. Thank you for your comments but I am withdrawing my poem to redo. Is that okay with you? I did not follow all of the rules but used my 6 words in random order. I am not sure I can rearrange it, but am going to try. Love, and thank you again. Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 3:36 PM
Very sexy piece Mr. J. and penned so well with passion and emotion and seductiveness beyond compare.. enjoyed reading this extremely written creative write for my reading pleasure today... appreciate your HM for Volatility in The Gahzal contest... it was a hard composition but then I would not have it any other way ..if u get my drift... the winning entries were wisely chosen so thankxxx for considering my work one of your favorite reads... luv.. "Sweetheart"
Lusha Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Very sensual and creative, beautifully written..enjoyed...Allie
Chircop Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 9:22 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem dear Friend,Its sensual and beautiful..Cleopatra was a beautiful,Sensual and a Woman of Wisdom.,,A capturer of Men's attention..I think your Cleopatra captured your heart quite well..I wonder if she does the belly dancing too:)..Beautiful poem..nice tribute..original ideas..Charma
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 6:59 PM
I like this one alot, even the sexual part, it was quite tastefully done! Loved the seven seas part! Luv, andrea
Falotico Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 10:00 AM
nice tribute.. and very well written my friend!!
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