Clenched Fists and Silent Tears

crouched in the corner
her head is covered
face blood smothered
when the bruises fade
their replaced with another
she looks in the mirror
with makeup she covers
drops to her knees
hangs her head and she cries
each day that passes, another piece of her dies
he sees her crying and calls her weak
hits  her hard, he's upped the tweak
she hears the screams of her 5 year old son
"daddy daddy stop! stop hitting mum"!
but he doesn't listen it only fuels his rage
so he hits her again like a dog in a cage
her eyes are swollen
her nose is broken
she prays to God to give her a token
a token of courage, for strength to walk away
life is a burden she now faces every day
fear is his partner, they now own  her soul
he has stolen her spirit, her life he controls
clumps of her hair lay scattered on the floor
she cant breathe, she cant fight anymore
her broken bones they hurt
blood stains on her shirt
his taunts and nasty words scarred in her mind
how could love ever have been so blind?
once a strong woman now broken and numb
she now looks at the woman he has made her become
and so all the love she gave
slowly fades away
she's gotta say goodbye
before she dies inside
all the love she gave
now replaced with hate
her scars are torn apart
just like her broken heart
she looks at her son, sees the tears in his eyes
and comforts her boy, then together they cry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/14/2016 8:55:00 PM
Hi, Sabrina. It's nice to see you and your list of your nice writings here. It only means that you really love this site do does the writing. ;)
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Date: 5/15/2016 6:49:00 PM
thankyou so much everybody for your kind words and encouraging advice. I will definitely be posting more, I have a lot of very deep poems and all related to hard life choices or circumstances. I am still in a dark place so hopefully I can soon write some happy, calm poetry. love this site thankyou!!
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Date: 5/7/2016 10:44:00 AM
Sabrina, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sabrina Lambie
Date: 5/15/2016 6:53:00 PM
thankyou so much, you made me smile by saying you will read my poems as yes, most of them are very deep and sad because I have had a lot of negative and sad situations in my life that have affected me in a way that the only healing I get now is to express through writing. I will certainly look at your poems and am happy to have you as my poetry friend xx
Date: 5/4/2016 7:00:00 AM
Sabrina, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Date: 5/4/2016 4:54:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Sabrina. :)
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Date: 5/3/2016 9:25:00 PM
Sabrina, it's like crying Wolf...I like it!, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/3/2016 9:25:00 PM
i even rated your poem with a 7
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Date: 5/3/2016 8:14:00 PM
Welcome to Soup, Sabrina. A very intense poem. You had me routing for her... I think it is a strong poem, but it ends with her crying. I wonder what would happen if you took the last four lines and moved them up under "before she dies inside//her scars are torn apart ...then together they cry//all her love she gave//now replaced with hate. You could even give it to more lines... maybe something about finding strength. I know from experience it is hard to leave. Writing helps...
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Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 5/3/2016 8:16:00 PM
PS - Welcome to Soup. IF you click on the new poets link on the left, under Member poets and poems. You can find other poets who just joined Soup. If you click on New Poems All you can read the poems posted by everyone, including YOU! Hope you enjoy Soup.
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