Cleaving

You stripped the jungles of the world
You blew the hunting horn
You chased the beasts out of the field
You pricked the bloody thorn

You drove the leper from the streets
You martyred men of war
You stood on mountains made of steel
Molten, to the core

With words of want you praised your gods
As children took up arms
You cleaved the tumor from the wound 
– The cancer wasn’t gone

You hid the truth within yourself
You never could believe
You were the blight that wrecked the cell
Yourself it was 
You sought to cleave –

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Date: 5/3/2024 4:39:00 PM
People and too much power are never a good mix, unless there's a little wisdom thrown in there, too... Your wise words are thought-provoking, John... Great work!
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John Oldham
Date: 5/5/2024 11:54:00 AM
So true, Kelly, We are our own worst enemies - Regards, John
Date: 5/2/2024 6:14:00 PM
Mankind, society, cancer indeed. We talk a good game but the but we play like do do. Exceptional writing, John.
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John Oldham
Date: 5/5/2024 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel. Hope all is well! Best, John
Date: 4/4/2024 3:32:00 AM
Very powerful and well written John with great rhyming. A very thought provoking read with profound lines. ‘ you pricked the bloody thorn’ ‘ you hid the truth within yourself’ - great lines. Certainly lessons that should be learned as you said and the sooner the better. Really enjoyed this reflective poem. Thank you for sharing.
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John Oldham
Date: 4/5/2024 2:56:00 PM
Thanks, Christina! Appreciate your kudos!
Date: 4/2/2024 4:46:00 AM
I always appreciate great rhyming and this - complete with subject - is great rhyming John. Cheers - Gary
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John Oldham
Date: 4/2/2024 5:56:00 PM
Appreciate it, Gary. Thanks -
Date: 3/28/2024 6:50:00 PM
Raw- sounds like a lesson learned
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John Oldham
Date: 4/2/2024 5:55:00 PM
Or lessons NOT learned! Thanks for the comment, Paige. Best, John
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