Clear Vision

CLEAR    VISION

In a distant crowd innumerable
Our friends  -  like stars  -  look rather similar.
Their very sameness seems immutable:
Bland and unused days on our calendar.

Some dimly fill the nightly ocular
With colors varied.  Small or large, although
As  dwarfs  or giants in vernacular.
Darkly  far,  stars and men but poorly glow.

But closer yet, all make a richer show:
A mother’s eyes unique,  a husband’s handgrip tight:
We need their special soft attention so  --
And life, as given by the Sun  --  our right.

Our blessings true are always close at hand.
We do not see them in some distant band.

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(Spenserian sonnet in iambic pentameter)

Written by   Sydney Peck
Entered in   Debbie Guzzi ‘s  Contest  “Debbie and Cyndi's Sonneteers”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 5:11 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in the "Sonneteers" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Burch Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 1:33 PM
Congratulations!! Sydney on your win!! Well Done!! A lovely sonnet you have penned!! Blessings are never really very far from our heart-- wonderful--big hugs,love~deb :)
Macmillan Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 9:18 PM
Sidney, oh so much delighted us with this profound write. Lines 9 and 10 - the volta- are just stunning and set a benchmark. Congratulations on your win for this deep sonnet. Hugs, Cyndi
Williams Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 8:04 AM
Sydney congrats on your win, great poem..David
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