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Cleansing Shower

hot steamy cleansing shower renew my whole strength caressing drops touch soapy sensual moist steam warms my core until wrinkles develope impurity down the dark drain hole into sludge replenish the earth

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Eiken Laan

Date: 1/3/2011 1:28:00 PM

Doris, You write beautiful haiku, these are really lovely images and I love a haiku where I get a sense of scent, soapy sensual, that is just wonderful....I think my snail is definately eating your shrubs, they are eating mine LOL

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/20/2010 5:00:00 PM

sleansing showers can do much for the body& it's peace(: hope all is well, Doris. & may you have a great christmas with your family. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/16/2010 9:09:00 AM

Doris a brilliant series of haiku.. Enjoyed, hope your week's been a good one ;)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 7:18:00 AM

Good one..Hope those wrinkles go away..Your presence at my work made mine morning brighter...Mom

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2010 10:24:00 PM

Different kinds of showers, and three for one here. You have been busy for this contest. It's wonderful to be so inspired. Love the sensual part of your haiku. LUv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/14/2010 6:14:00 PM

Okay this one more poem and I hit the showers as per your inspiration, Doris.