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Cleaning the Spring

cleaning the spring of decaying leaves and branches clean when you see blue skies and salamanders near the bubbling vents

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2015 3:36:00 PM

Very nice one. Love the picture it creates.

Thomas Martin
Date: 12/12/2015 10:59:00 AM

BTW, I usually do not write tanka with the familiar 5-7-5-7-7 syllables. I do retain the short-long-short-long-long structure, as is the way mostly written now which allows more flexability!

Thomas Martin
Date: 12/11/2015 4:09:00 PM

Andrea, thanks so much for reading and commenting on many of my poems!! Puzzlement? Sometimes the Reply link appears, other times not. Any suggestions?