Cleaned Out

Robb Wilkins took three showers a day
he overdid some things he'd say.
But alas to his strain
less of him did remain
until he showered himself away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hoffman Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 10:20 AM
Whew, me thinks he met his demise thanks to OCD! Another cute and funny write Paul!:)
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January 23, 2019 at 8:25 PM
Thanks, Cheryl. Your comment reminds me of a winter season riddle. It goes thus: Joe: "What do you call an old snowman?" Moe: "I don't know." Joe: "Water." (I never was good at humor.) . Hugs, always, Paul
Godwin Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Love it - served as my morning chuckle with coffee so I thank you ... CayCay
Schneiter Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Thank you, CayCay. Your kind words mean a lot to me. I value them, and I appreciate them. hugs xxx
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 6:37 PM
This reminded me of a very old song called my baby has gone down the plughole! great humour as ever Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
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August 27, 2016 at 6:44 AM
As always, thank you, Jan. Praise from you, as I have said before, is golden; I treasure it. hugs x x x Paul
Smith Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 6:37 PM
lol....awesome Paul
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August 27, 2016 at 6:40 AM
Thank you, Tim. I appreciate your kind comment. One of my goals is to try to make my limericks as clever as yours.
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