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“From clay we rise, from love we are carried.”

- Poet

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Clay-Borne Love

Where upon the earth do I acquaint new life?
A Spirit who scampers upon a banshee breeze,
Unsure—anxious thoughts taking aim, rife, unmoored
Focus unsharp—a fog on a mountain freeze—trees
Seek hope, its landing unannounced, high and lofty:

A child, clay-borne, raised by morning’s star,
and bearing the velocity of love

Untainted, untrodden, undaunted, unstifled—
What nurtures freedom in a nature made for freedom
Time clicks; a moment slips, forgotten.
Hallowed, sought, bought, fraught—a chiefdom
Berean, listening without ears of cotton

Whispering, churning, turning, burning—wind
A persiflage ingested as thunder rumbles, grumbles
Persistence, resistance—conscripted in sin
There, a cry for wisdom, yet stuck—fumbled
Who? A father, mother, sister, brother—kin?

Progeny, cacophony—perhaps fools on atolls
All, forgotten tenets in interplanetary space
The medicament—far-reaching, teaching bleeding souls
Contrary to prevailing belief: to show no grace
Yet responsible life-stewards, a virtuous gift extols
Greater, higher—hope, faith, and love proclaim the Ancient Scrolls

Thunderstruck


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Bayles Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 7:42 AM
An interesting poem of contradictions. Of earth and spirits.
Rodgers Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 8:40 AM
Hello Mike, thank you! I appreciate how you named the tension between earth and spirit. That is exactly the space I was writing from. Grateful for your thoughtful note. Blessings, Daniel
Jones Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 3:54 AM
Thanks for sharing your poignant poem! Once again I’ve been inspired by your words and used your quote hoping you don’t mind. The poem is titled “Fluffy Poem” and it was just for fun! Have a blessed day Daniel!
Rodgers Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 8:41 AM
Dear Karen, you always bring such kindness. I am glad the poem spoke to you, and I am honored you used the quote in your own piece. That brings me joy. Wishing you a blessed day as well. Blessings, Daniel
Hind Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 11:48 PM
This is simply powerful, touching too in places. Wow, Daniel.
Rodgers Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 8:41 AM
Dear Paige, thank you for this generous response. I am grateful the poem carried some power and tenderness for you. Your words mean a lot. Blessings, Daniel
Daniel Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 1:40 AM
Deep astounding poetry, rhyming is top-level:)
Rodgers Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 8:42 AM
Dear Joanna, thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate your note about the rhyme. I worked carefully with the sound in this one, so your comment truly lifted me. Blessings, Daniel
Lane Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 1:37 PM
Daniel, your use of rhyme is marvelously carried throughout your verses. That is very appealing to me. In the South, there are many families with the name, Claiborne. I wonder if that could have been derived from such a thought. Well written.
Rodgers Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 8:43 AM
Dear Lin, I love that you brought in the Claiborne families from the South. What an interesting connection. Thank you for noticing the rhyme and flow. Your support is always appreciated. Blessings, Daniel
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April 14, 2026 at 12:02 PM
Life is difficult Daniel, your poem is testament to the twists, turns and paths each of us takes; personally my own life has been forged by the environment I grew up in, and live in today, I don’t see how it could be otherwise, we once had a perceived trust in those ancient scrolls and those preaching them over here in Ireland, the scrolls may well prove be true, the preachers not so much (to put it mildly) Regardless of all that, your poem is exceptionally well written and heartfelt, cheers David
Rodgers Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 8:44 AM
Hello David, your honesty is something I value. You captured the heart of the poem, the struggle and the longing for something trustworthy. I appreciate your reflections on your own life and history. Thank you for reading with such depth. Blessings, Daniel
Cunningham Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 10:23 AM
You always take your readers on a mystical journey away from the norm, from the ancient scrolls love proclaimed, hopefully it will be the saviour of mankind. Well composed Daniel. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Rodgers Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 8:45 AM
Hello Tom, I always appreciate the way you read my work. Thank you for taking the journey into the mystical side of this piece. I share your hope that love will be what saves us. Wishing you a good week as well. Blessings, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 9:46 AM
Your "Clay-Borne Love" is a wonderful write/story with great pictures. A great quote. So True.... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a great day writing away............
Rodgers Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 8:45 AM
Dear Paula, thank you for your steady kindness. I am glad the story and imagery worked for you. And thank you for the good luck wish. I hope your day is filled with good writing too. Blessings, Daniel
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