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Clawed Claude

There once was a lion tamer named Claude For twenty years the cheering hordes he'd awed He had been bitten and mauled But the mad crowds he enthralled Alas, Claude met his doom when he was clawed! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

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Carrie Richards

Date: 6/11/2012 9:07:00 AM

Applaud....to Claude's clawed remains!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/10/2012 9:02:00 PM

I was laughing before I opened this Bob, I knewfrom the title I was in for a treat and sure enough! You never fail to amaze.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2012 7:54:00 PM

I love how you put together claude with clawed in that last line. that is what makes a limerick stand out!

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/9/2012 3:37:00 PM

This one is quite interesting! I wasn't expecting the ending that I received with this limerick! What a great exquisite poem Bob! Excellent Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2012 1:25:00 PM

This one is bitter sweet like the Nestle's Semi-Sweet Chocolate Chips that are so good..Enjoyed reading..I wonder which one will be your entry into PD's great contest..I have written a few to add to the mix on PS..Thanks for stopping by..I enjoyed reading your comments and learning that you were enjoying a cup of coffee..Sara