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If freshman year was aspirational
and sophomore year was unhinged
junior year was put up or shut up
and senior year is a dash to the finish line

This year’s on fast forward—and it’s for keeps
every to-do list has value-laden questions
things seem sharp edged, single use and intense
it’s all about trajectories and ‘landing spots”

Let’s wax poetic..

Produce now, or spend fury on thyself—all else is untenable
we’re past youth and ignorance—your honour’s at stake

Suitors call you by name, like well-acquainted friends
they took your measure—you’re beyond the mark of others
they seduce with money—the future brings liberty and noble deeds.

So don the the garland and prove thyself—take the field
join the battle—now’s the reward—aidless, perpetual toil
with every motion be right, it’s thy shunless destiny.
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A song for this:
A Man of Great Promise by The Style Council
Headstart For Happiness by The Style Council

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Date: 1/11/2025 9:55:00 AM
Half angel half eagle, one eye on the world. -Jane Siberry
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Anais Vionet
Date: 1/11/2025 10:48:00 AM
A song lyric. I like the song, the style, the voice - I'll have to check her out. Thx =]
Date: 1/11/2025 6:42:00 AM
"To infinity... and beyond! (Why does that feel cliched?)
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/11/2025 11:03:00 AM
Moi?
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Anais Vionet
Date: 1/11/2025 10:44:00 AM
You're toying with me.
Date: 1/11/2025 6:32:00 AM
Many people will relate to your experiences...
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Anais Vionet
Date: 1/11/2025 10:45:00 AM
It's probably universal
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/11/2025 6:40:00 AM
I'm a former Yalie. Fosho

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