Notes About The Poem

class of 25

If freshman year was aspirational
and sophomore year was unhinged
junior year was put up or shut up
and senior year is a dash to the finish line

This year’s on fast forward—and it’s for keeps
every to-do list has value-laden questions
things seem sharp edged, single use and intense
it’s all about trajectories and ‘landing spots”

Let’s wax poetic..

Produce now, or spend fury on thyself—all else is untenable
we’re past youth and ignorance—your honour’s at stake

Suitors call you by name, like well-acquainted friends
they took your measure—you’re beyond the mark of others
they seduce with money—the future brings liberty and noble deeds.

So don the the garland and prove thyself—take the field
join the battle—now’s the reward—aidless, perpetual toil
with every motion be right, it’s thy shunless destiny.
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A song for this:
A Man of Great Promise by The Style Council
Headstart For Happiness by The Style Council
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Conn Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Half angel half eagle, one eye on the world. -Jane Siberry
Vionet Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 10:48 AM
A song lyric. I like the song, the style, the voice - I'll have to check her out. Thx =]
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January 11, 2025 at 6:32 AM
Many people will relate to your experiences...
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January 11, 2025 at 10:45 AM
It's probably universal
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