Notes About The Poem

Clashing Colors

the clouds were charcoal
with deep azure peeking through
sun and mists clashing

beautiful drama
surprised, eyes turned to the skies
on the path of blooms

ever changing days
what we knew gone suddenly
in the sapphire haze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 7:16 PM
If a haiku can be 'dramatic,' yours surely is. Wow! Happy 2023, Evelyn. :) gw
Buehler Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 7:27 PM
Thank you for the compliment and well wishes, Gershon. May your new year be filled with joy. :) Evelyn
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 10:19 AM
beautiful images, Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 12:52 PM
Thank you, Andrea. :)
Bangalee Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 8:56 PM
nature moves on dramatic way!~ nice to read your Haiku Poem
Buehler Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:01 PM
Thank you very much, Mahtab. :)
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