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Clarity's Pure Thoughts

The true light unites

            stream of object too subject,

                refraction repaired...

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Carolyn Devonshire

December 17, 2010 at 10:54 AM

Very profound, Jay. Really like this Haiku. There is a lot more in the message than can be found on the surface. Well done, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 17, 2010 at 8:23 AM

Pure thoughts well defined by this images nicely, jay

Wilma Neels

December 16, 2010 at 9:27 PM

Jay, I really enjoyed your thoughts on my "stagnant heart" piece.. As for your haiku, you brought your point across in a very unique way, thanks for the smiles ;)

Zaeem Yousaf

December 16, 2010 at 3:48 PM

dear you are right. but unfartunately you are not aware of the place where sitting i wrote in. in the meeting of oppresser were killing humanity so it impelled me to criticize youth when enough power sometime leades to ignorence and violence comparatively the old who has difficulty to just take steps.(with the reference you commented on my poetry-youth is an evil abode). thanks! you inferred at last right.