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. Up mine hands go as with mine knees down mine feet go with very fast step bang bang bang the neighbors can hear my heart's pulse through mine feet Mine eyne and maws open with jubilation (((((Clap))))) ourn bodies meet

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Date: 7/25/2013 5:47:00 AM
nicely done james ;}
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:41:00 PM
Dear Sire James, My Heart is joyful as I retrieved the Parchment and scant in time. I feel I must go back to the Bazarr to retrieve more ink for mine Quill as again I write thine third Proclaimation of Congratulations in as many reads. "Clap" a Feature of my lord's Wisdom, Knowledge, and Inspiration. I was to sojourn to other Inspirations, but Nay I will once more read of YOUR LOVE. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal "Integer 2" Liege...Harry
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Date: 1/23/2010 8:07:00 AM
ZAP! This is so open to interpretation. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 1/20/2010 12:20:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/19/2010 8:26:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, congrats on your well deserved feature. keep writing. Your poetry friend Adeleke
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Date: 1/19/2010 3:07:00 AM
Very expressive poem, James. Congratulations on this feature of the week. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 1/18/2010 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week James. I hope you have many more. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:37:00 PM
Congrats James on your featured poem of the week on Soup... enjoyed this well written poem... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/17/2010 7:05:00 PM
feature cheers!! one of 40! you are special.
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James Peranteau
Date: 6/1/2021 9:12:00 PM
Hi Doris...missed ya, much love, james oh, and a belated ty
Date: 4/19/2009 6:47:00 AM
Nice..Who cares about the neighbors??!? Awesome words.. Hugs, Robin
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Date: 3/19/2009 5:00:00 PM
whoopie, I love getting "jumped" LOL Light & Love
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