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the striker in me, your ghost— the woodsy holding patterns, the distance of us between chimes

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Date: 9/7/2024 10:59:00 AM
Cool title for this catchy little poem
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Date: 9/3/2024 1:30:00 PM
Great one liner.. but remember, a monoku is always 17 syllables or less..
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Date: 9/3/2024 9:59:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, Paige. Very dynamic. Blessings!
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Date: 9/2/2024 1:35:00 PM
Each image pondered! Very cool, Paige!
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Date: 9/1/2024 11:13:00 PM
powerful last line, holds the intrigue, beautiful
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Date: 9/1/2024 3:45:00 PM
Ghost at start, chimes at end. Beautiful image that reminds me of a cemetery it is unique.
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Date: 9/1/2024 2:50:00 PM
Creative one. Way to go. I wonder if it is for a contest. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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