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Clammy and Queasy

Tiny Spiny Surly Ugly Tiny spiny slimy creepiness Surly ugly spooky nastiness AP: 3rd place 2021 Posted on August 5, 2019

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/9/2019 2:28:00 PM

This should repel, but I am drawn in, fascinated, somehow...

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/9/2019 4:05:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Michelle. Having feelings of inadequacy after reading other tyburns... LOL

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/6/2019 3:12:00 PM

i like the turnout of yours...though i am new to the form...i think you penned it nicely :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2019 3:55:00 PM

You are so graceful and modest, Sandra... Your tyburn is worthy of the greatest poets.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/6/2019 11:35:00 AM

A tyburn that brought me into full clammy, queasy mode!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2019 2:14:00 PM

LOL sorry about that!

Kaveesha Ruwindi

Date: 8/6/2019 12:09:00 AM

Nice poem Line, good luck in the contest :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2019 5:02:00 AM

Thanks, Kaveesha. Much appreciated.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/5/2019 8:06:00 PM

This is quite cute; love it and good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 8:25:00 PM

Thanks, ML. I must say it certainly is a bizarre form. Not very graceful.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 8/5/2019 6:14:00 PM

Good Job! Feels creepy.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 7:28:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/5/2019 4:13:00 PM

Feeling it, Line! Nicely done!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2019 4:41:00 PM

LOL thanks, Kim.