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Clammy and Queasy

Tiny
Spiny
Surly
Ugly
Tiny spiny slimy creepiness
Surly ugly spooky nastiness



AP: 3rd place 2021

word playtyburn

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Michelle Faulkner

August 9, 2019 at 2:28 PM

This should repel, but I am drawn in, fascinated, somehow...

Line Gauthier

August 9, 2019 at 4:05 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Michelle. Having feelings of inadequacy after reading other tyburns... LOL

Sandra Adams

August 6, 2019 at 3:12 PM

i like the turnout of yours...though i am new to the form...i think you penned it nicely :)

Line Gauthier

August 6, 2019 at 3:55 PM

You are so graceful and modest, Sandra... Your tyburn is worthy of the greatest poets.

Caren Krutsinger

August 6, 2019 at 11:35 AM

A tyburn that brought me into full clammy, queasy mode!

Line Gauthier

August 6, 2019 at 2:14 PM

LOL sorry about that!

Kaveesha Ruwindi

August 6, 2019 at 12:09 AM

Nice poem Line, good luck in the contest :)

Line Gauthier

August 6, 2019 at 5:02 AM

Thanks, Kaveesha. Much appreciated.

M. L. Kiser

August 5, 2019 at 8:06 PM

This is quite cute; love it and good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier

August 5, 2019 at 8:25 PM

Thanks, ML. I must say it certainly is a bizarre form. Not very graceful.

Timothy Mcguire

August 5, 2019 at 6:14 PM

Good Job! Feels creepy.

Line Gauthier

August 5, 2019 at 7:28 PM

Thanks, Timothy.

Kim Rodrigues

August 5, 2019 at 4:13 PM

Feeling it, Line! Nicely done!

Line Gauthier

August 5, 2019 at 4:41 PM

LOL thanks, Kim.

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