Clairsentience

Our experience between my fingers, 
your cartilage scares;
The ocean and the approaching sea band 
— another pass for
both our same reflexes. 
We touch with halo ring in prayer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 5/18/2025 1:10:00 PM
Paige, this is such a delicate yet intense piece--it hums with energy just beneath the skin. “Your cartilage scares” and “we touch with halo ring in prayer” are especially striking--vulnerable and sacred at once. You’ve captured that strange, spiritual knowing with such subtle power.
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Date: 4/22/2025 10:44:00 AM
gosh, I never heard of that word used as your title before. Such an interesting poem, Paige. I really love the last line of it. Thanks for seeing so many of my poems.
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Date: 2/25/2025 5:10:00 AM
Dear Paige, How beautifully tactile, capturing a moment of deep connection in a way that feels almost spiritual. Your use of words makes every touch and shared reflex feel sacred. I love that it is filled with grace and depth. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 2/23/2025 10:49:00 AM
Dear Paige, this is absolutely lovely! I always admire your imagery and use of nature! Reading this is really enjoyable!
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Date: 2/23/2025 8:05:00 AM
The Good God needs we pray a lot.
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Date: 2/22/2025 8:54:00 AM
Dear sweet paige, this is absolutely gorgeous! Your way with metaphors and how you use elements of nature to express is always so impressive! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always
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Date: 2/22/2025 4:43:00 AM
i'm seeing several of these sijos and this is an intriguing one, deep, as your writes so often are..thx for your continued support of my work :)
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Date: 2/21/2025 10:57:00 PM
Gently powerful ! Like a drop into the sea. ThkU x
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Date: 2/21/2025 6:37:00 PM
Interesting…love the last line.
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