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Clairsentience

Our experience between my fingers, your cartilage scares; The ocean and the approaching sea band — another pass for both our same reflexes. We touch with halo ring in prayer.

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Alesia Leach

Date: 5/18/2025 1:10:00 PM

Paige, this is such a delicate yet intense piece--it hums with energy just beneath the skin. “Your cartilage scares” and “we touch with halo ring in prayer” are especially striking--vulnerable and sacred at once. You’ve captured that strange, spiritual knowing with such subtle power.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2025 10:44:00 AM

gosh, I never heard of that word used as your title before. Such an interesting poem, Paige. I really love the last line of it. Thanks for seeing so many of my poems.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/25/2025 5:10:00 AM

Dear Paige, How beautifully tactile, capturing a moment of deep connection in a way that feels almost spiritual. Your use of words makes every touch and shared reflex feel sacred. I love that it is filled with grace and depth. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/23/2025 10:49:00 AM

Dear Paige, this is absolutely lovely! I always admire your imagery and use of nature! Reading this is really enjoyable!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/23/2025 8:05:00 AM

The Good God needs we pray a lot.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/22/2025 8:54:00 AM

Dear sweet paige, this is absolutely gorgeous! Your way with metaphors and how you use elements of nature to express is always so impressive! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/22/2025 4:43:00 AM

i'm seeing several of these sijos and this is an intriguing one, deep, as your writes so often are..thx for your continued support of my work :)

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 2/21/2025 10:57:00 PM

Gently powerful ! Like a drop into the sea. ThkU x

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/21/2025 6:37:00 PM

Interesting…love the last line.